Recent Comments

5/28/25, 12:08 AM
Amazing. I see a submissive X submissive friendship sprouting between Ivan and Austin! You love to see it. Austin is becoming quite the cock sucker. Just needs to learn some manners. Ivan, oh Ivan has been transformed into the perfect bottom. Soon he will accept his true calling and sexuality. I feel it. His dad… gonna be interesting when the inevitable happens again. 😏
Alex
4/25/20, 4:23 PM
**Well, well, well... ...another STANDOUT story from the incredibly talented EdIam!!!!** Truly, this is one of the best I've read in quite some time. I've found myself returning to it on multiple occasions. With no disrespect meant towards the rest of the series (and no judgement towards the different topics in those chapters, which simply aren't to my liking), I must say I was thrilled by the chapter "His Last Hypnosis Show". It's brilliant even as a standalone story. Highlights: It deals with the sexy jock Grant, who is seemingly a good guy, but benefits greatly from a slight attitude adjustment regarding his views on experimenting with other men. Much to his surprise, and dick-inflating delight, he soon learns his good buddy Jon has, like himself, recently taken up an interest in hypnosis. Fun, fun, fun! For me to be able to really embrace a story, the induction methods, and the pacing of the induction scenes have to be of the highest quality -- and (as usual) EdIam scores a perfect 5/5 in this area! BEST PARTS: The subjects are wholly unaware of the situation. That is gold, in my opinion. This, plus the fantastic trigger phrase "I'm your personal hypnotist" are wonderful nods to "Web of Trust", as you noted in your intro. The "Web of Trust" series is, without dispute, an absolute masterwork! In fifteen years of reading hundreds of tales of gay hypno erotica, I can say "Web of Trust" is in my top five favorite stories/series of all time. So it was very cool to see yourself and RobinHood70 get to comment on and enjoy each other's work. Thanks for this story, EdIam. I hope you are well, and I'm very excited to see what you dream up next! -- Alex

5/27/25, 10:33 PM
@[Alex](/user/show/1365633) I cannot express better what i think about this exciting story. You are an excellent author Edlam
May 19, 2025
5/27/25, 8:10 PM
This story is so exciting that i can't hardly await the next chapters. Please, get us more

5/27/25, 10:22 PM
@[floetenspieler](/user/show/10027928) I already released Chapter 2, 3, and 4 on my Ko-fi!
Sub Jock
5/26/25, 12:53 AM
Noah, should I be worried about growing my glutes too much at the gym? Also, what gym clothing would you recommend?

lukas pucci
5/26/25, 5:43 PM
@Sub Jock NOAH: nah, man, the bigger the better, chicks dig it, trust me, keep making it bigger, and use those tight things, you know the ones i mean, that go all the way up, good for form

Sub Jock
5/27/25, 9:44 PM
@[lukas pucci](/user/show/10040865) If you say so Noah, I'll keep it tight and make sure I'm in my proper position for good form. Though the more I train my glutes and pecs, the more sensitive they get. I swear I feel a jolt every time anything brushes either. That's good right?
5/27/25, 9:38 PM
Can't wait for more
5/27/25, 9:26 PM
Amazing story. very well written. And the slow overwhelming of the boys and the explanations of the mechanics behind are gorgeous
5/27/25, 12:14 PM
Although a short chapter, it was still exciting with putting some leathermen to sleep! It looks like Professor Rosenwave and his two assistants might escape from the clutches of the Fiends. But what will become of the various Fiend sons? Looking forward to the next chapter, SleepyAsh!!

5/27/25, 9:25 PM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) The good Professor is off to new adventures now! :grin: but he will definitely be returning to future stories :P
Anonymous
5/27/25, 9:01 PM
Great start to the story but why not just call it what it is chloroform. Sleepy stories are definitely great when you go into the details that you did about the chloroform been administered

5/27/25, 9:10 PM
@Anonymous The site changed its rules , writers can’t use chloroform in stories anymore as it can be used in real life

5/27/25, 9:18 PM
@Anonymous That used to be the case, however due to changes in the site's rules, use of named real-life drugs is not accepted. To keep posting new chapters of the story, I changed it to :sparkles: glorochlorm :sparkles: I am very sorry if this negatively impacts the reading experience :(
5/27/25, 8:38 PM
I think it’s a pretty good concept, and the story is not bad. Everything happens so fast not a criticism just an observation. Why not take your time to spin out the story a bit more to capture what the “hero”is thinking as well
5/26/25, 12:28 PM
wow worth the wait, maybe Dr Brown should not have put his trust in SF-08 without taking away its ability for free thinking. But SF-08 was right and Dr Brown now known as Drone Master is a great improvement - Even the Dr Agrees

5/27/25, 6:32 PM
@[MalSkin](/user/show/131172) Thanks for the kind words.