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10/14/19, 5:43 PM
I'm actually not happy with the destruction of both the main character and a life just to have another character take control. But what can I do, I'm not great a writing reality change stories.

Anonymous
11/12/23, 2:34 PM
@[ChronoSeth](/user/show/427248) I agree. I also feel bad for Stan who got estranged long ago for no reason
11/12/23, 2:23 PM
Excellent start. You definitely have my attention. Looking forward to seeing more.
11/12/23, 9:05 AM
this story is fucking amazing; edging to it over and over. please write more
Ben
11/12/23, 8:29 AM
Love how your stories are both hot and funny at parts ❤️ 🔥
Chasm
11/12/23, 6:35 AM
Thanks so much for the update. I’m patient of course just wanting to know how the story ends. And then can’t wait for what you write next. Maybe in a different alternate story (after you’re done with this one) Travis takes a different set of pills and turns into a black stud like Jamal and Kingston with a BBC? Could be interesting 😏
11/12/23, 6:14 AM
Glad to see you back. I love your kind of story. Please update soon ❤️
11/12/23, 4:48 AM
Holy hell. That was so hot.
Anonymous
11/12/23, 4:15 AM
Every Saturday I've been hoping a new chapter comes out -- obviously you're providing people with awesome free content so no rush, but hoping more comes out soon. :pray:
11/12/23, 2:20 AM
My tip is to not use too many tags that are going to be used in future chapters. The tags set up expectations and finishing can make the chapter feel lacking.

11/12/23, 3:15 AM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) Yeah, I realized that after. I guess I did that so you'd know what was coming, but I see that. I'll check that over next time.
11/12/23, 3:03 AM
Very fun. I wonder who’s gonna give in first.