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11/12/23, 1:35 AM
I'd love to read a continuation of this story. I like the concept.

11/12/23, 1:44 AM
@[randy7869](/user/show/980242) Oh the next part is already written. People just keep telling me that my stories are too long and that they would like 4,000 to 6,000 word chapters. I thought I was going to be posting about that much, and it turned out that the scene broke at around the 9,000 word mark. So there's another roughly 6,000 words coming next weekend after you all have had the chance to read this one.
Redan
11/11/23, 9:50 PM
Cute and wholesome is not a term I usually use for stories on this site, but it feels like it fits the bill here. What a fun lore dump. Loved it!

11/12/23, 1:33 AM
@[Redan](/user/show/129598) Thanks! I hope you're looking forward to part two, which will be dropping next weekend.
TW
11/11/23, 10:22 PM
The plot continues to thicken! Looking forward to the next chapter - and hopefully more of Tri-Hard too ;)

11/11/23, 11:44 PM
@TW Thanks! And don't worry; **Tri-Hard** will be back soon, once he has prepared for his expanded army!
11/11/23, 11:30 PM
Another edit! This chapter really starts to bring things together on the Coin side of the narrative. The way the doctor locked the door suggests it's not unusual for new pets to try to do a runner or be apprehensive. There's a palpable disconnect between Rhys's excitement and normalcy in the process for his registering a new pet who he's excited to have, and Jasper's lack of options and going down that rabbit hole as a best-case for the situation. The world's eager pet culture and how it doesn't shy away from sexuality really fascinates me. That a doctor's visit could be so intimate, to the point of mapping bodies to make customised toys to fit. It's a natural implementation of their advanced technology and their hyper-sexual desires. Teasing a new pet mid-appointment. I enjoyed the calming of our dear Jasper to let him take in some of the 'culture' of it. Very sexy scene in the doctor's office. I really love the way you combine sex and sexiness with character development. Especially the little moments where Jasper and Rhys connect some more. Whether or not that's also a side effect of Aris's conditioning. Allowing Jasper a break and supporting him is really sweet. Looking forward to the re-post of chapter 4 in the (near?) future.
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 9:11 PM
Very enjoyable

11/11/23, 9:43 PM
@[Masters toy](/user/show/10022805) Glad to hear it! 😌

11/11/23, 11:23 PM
@Wakeup Keep it going see where it brings u I have a rubber boot fetishism maybe change two guys into rubber wellington boots walking in muck
11/11/23, 11:17 PM
I love this story so much
11/11/23, 10:57 PM
Heartwarming story!
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 10:21 PM
Great story! I'm glad they changed each other not just one of them.
Anonymous
11/11/23, 8:57 PM
When will you be releasing Part 9? This series is so good!!
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 8:08 PM
I loved this story. It was sweet how they end up together and communicating and running changes by one another -- to a degree. It's not going to be long before they're going to need to change their stamina to keep up with that insatiable libido and constantly full balls needing to unload in their favourite place. Thank you for posting. I hope they're very happy together.