Recent Comments

11/6/23, 5:57 AM
This was such a wild ride of a story! You never disappoint and always give extremely well rounded characters. Loved it.
Ash
11/6/23, 5:33 AM
This story is literally the reason I got on this site. Just when I thought it couldn’t get hotter, you go and prove me wrong. Never stop writing!
Ben
11/6/23, 5:14 AM
Still my go to story, love this🔥
11/6/23, 3:19 AM
Fuck yes!!!
Anonymous
11/6/23, 2:48 AM
Can we expect some one on one time between Malcom and Romeo in a bonus chapter or spin off?

11/6/23, 3:00 AM
@Anonymous Absolutely. Even though this story’s over, I want to keep doing stuff w the world/characters
11/1/23, 7:41 PM
There were a few editing mistakes that need to be corrected, but overall, this is a very good start to a vampire story. Your choice of words over sentences and the effects they create in building the atmosphere and emotions of the moment are very nice. You definitely can't leave things as they stand; you have to developing the story out and show what happens.

11/1/23, 10:54 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thanks! I plan to keep going if people enjoy it :wink:

11/6/23, 1:54 AM
@[killing_time]This was good but only keep going if you have ideas for the next chapter. Otherwise just leave as is.
11/6/23, 12:26 AM
Love it. This is a great series, the expanding horizons for Adam is pretty hot. I have a feeling though this is a little pre-meditated by Hunter who might just be a little bit not entirely straight! 🔥🔥🔥
11/6/23, 12:25 AM
@Franco Apollo - Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. And yeah it was inspired by the book but the story is stand alone. @astrolub - Yeah, I always thought it was one of the more disturbing twist endings. Nothing like lulling the audience into a false sense of "Everything's ok!" and then being like "NOPE!"
11/6/23, 12:18 AM
The love and care that you have for your characters and the world are one of the things I love most about this series. Getting to re-read it with your revisions has me falling just as much in love with it all over again. Adrien's backed into a corner and it all getting too much along with Rhys and Lemon's sympathy for 'Jasper' really ends the chapter on a powerful moment. I really love the juxtaposition between them that Adrien points out. Normally, becoming a pet and all of the joining the household and various fittings and check-ups and what not are an excitement journey towards being a pet for a Coin. But, for Jasper, it's more of a daunting gauntlet of trials to hammer him into a shape to keep him out of jail, in a way. The attitudes of the two sides of the arrangement start so far apart. Adrien seems to pick up where Rhys is coming from, but I'm not sure Rhys does the reverse. There's a 'for his own good' sense to it, and that he'll come around. It is. Jasper could more easily escape Rhys than a prison. But, the longer he waits, will he want to...?
Lampshade15
11/5/23, 11:26 PM
Jesus Christ, what a hot finale! Thanks so much for another wonderful story.

11/5/23, 11:30 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Glad you enjoyed!! Thanks so much for supporting this series 😁