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11/4/23, 11:44 PM
Scary yet hot. Reminds me of a story on tv about a plant that took over a town

11/5/23, 4:29 PM
@[Dream maker](/user/show/908635) thank you! my guiltiest pleasure is erotic horror. There is a part two coming soon
Anonymous
11/5/23, 4:14 PM
Continue writing more parts it's amazing 🤩
Kippers
11/5/23, 2:05 PM
The spelling errors were annoying, and I see they haven't been fixed despite the years since the author said he would. The idea is fucking hot, and I love the photo of the massively hung dad in just a t-shirt. I'll be reading every chapter, and hoping there are more to cum. These boys have been hungering for years, and need more than one daddy session. I'm sure at least one will want to bring a little brother along. Got to show him the ropes... that a sexy daddy can shoot in the air after a dry spell. I can't wait to see what each boy hopes for from his favorite daddy. Since Mr Study seems to be aware, I expect some daddies will really enjoy their experiences with a hot & horny young boy exploring all his fantasies. I hope further chapters have fewer spelling errors. You definitely need to identify who is speaking, because we absolutely cannot tell who is saying what.
Reb
11/5/23, 2:02 PM
Hot story; good action; good pacing. Another chapter would be great.
11/5/23, 1:43 PM
Brilliant
11/5/23, 1:19 PM
I'm really enjoying this story. Like others have said, I really like the two characters and their blossoming relationship. Although they both profess not to be gay, I'm still enjoying what they're doing with each other. Looking forward for more to come!
Anonymous
11/5/23, 10:08 AM
just when i think you can’t get any better you top yourself more than these tops fuck fuck the shit outta theo. this continues to be one the best stories on this site and i look forward to every update. the new characters are exactly what i’ve been waiting for and the set up of these jocks basically competing who can fuck theo the best is such a welcome turn of events. especially loved how teddys mischievous personality basically instigated the sexting towards the end. really hot stuff. completely assumed this story was done but this chapter not only surprised me but exceeded my wildest expectations. cannot wait to see how theo deals with all these competitive hung jocks. always love your stories.
11/5/23, 9:07 AM
Very stylish writing, very hot descriptions. Has a satisfying end...but could lead to more. The story is admittedly formulaic, but the execution is terrific. Thanks for beginning to share your writing here. I hope there will be more.
11/5/23, 8:41 AM
For some reason, I always thought it was one of the creepier G00sebumps stories. (SPOILERS) Maybe because I remember it as they all seemed to finally get things right, and then there’s the kid’s handedness that reveals the evil double is still out and the little brother (if I remember correctly) is trapped with no way out.
11/5/23, 6:40 AM
Omg, and update - thank you for posting! Top-tier writing as always, keep it up and have a great day!