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Oct 31, 2023
11/2/23, 12:19 PM
The swimming metaphors are so beautiful here, and the wistfulness of this piece is nearly musical. I dearly loved this. I often have a very hard time reading homophobia these days -- whether it be the casually toxic masculinity of sporty types or ingrained behavior of boys brought up to unthinkingly act that way. I lived that life in central Texas and it was deeply destructive to the psyche. And I think it's destructive in both directions. So the fact that you transcended that with a sort of love-at-first-sight, damn-the-odds love story really blunts that. I don't care if it's realistic or not, it was palliative. Thank you.
11/2/23, 12:10 PM
Please please I need more
11/2/23, 11:21 AM
This is so hot. I can’t wait for more to cum
Jul 29, 2021
BodyOdor
11/2/23, 10:22 AM
A nice, tight piece of prose. And it stinks too!
Anonymous
11/2/23, 6:48 AM
It's great but there's only an indirect mention of his cock growing, no use of adjectives like 'thick' or 'big' for his cock, and no mention of its final size D: Loved the leather side tho
11/2/23, 6:39 AM
Vielen Dank für Deinen Kommentar. Ich werde das nächste Kapitel hoffentlich noch vor dem ersten Advent fortsetzen können, muss es aber noch komplett schreiben (im Kopf ist es fertig). Nebenbei kommen auch weitere Geschichten von mir, die zum Teil auch schon fertig sind. ;-) Also: Stay Tuned.... next chapter cumming!
11/2/23, 6:39 AM
Such a great premise, but then it didn't quite go in the way I was expecting and hoping. I know I'm probably too obsessed with characterization, but since you briefly introduced two supporting characters (Pete and Tim), I wanted to see more of how they interacted normally, then witness as they slowly changed and became obsessed with drinking the Bull Milk. For me, that's the erotic heart of the story, and I wanted you to spend more time showing precisely how the individual men had changed (becoming a brainwashed collective) rather than just telling us about "the silent, almost robotic way the the men moved." I'd love to take a stab at writing a story using this same basic premise, if I can only find free time to write in 2024.
11/2/23, 4:31 AM
We need more of that incredibly hot story! A new chapter please!
11/2/23, 2:28 AM
Whoa. I love ur writing . This is brilliantly done
11/2/23, 2:04 AM
So so good