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11/2/23, 12:10 PM
Please please I need more
11/2/23, 11:21 AM
This is so hot. I can’t wait for more to cum
Jul 29, 2021
BodyOdor
11/2/23, 10:22 AM
A nice, tight piece of prose. And it stinks too!
Anonymous
11/2/23, 6:48 AM
It's great but there's only an indirect mention of his cock growing, no use of adjectives like 'thick' or 'big' for his cock, and no mention of its final size D: Loved the leather side tho
11/2/23, 6:39 AM
Vielen Dank für Deinen Kommentar. Ich werde das nächste Kapitel hoffentlich noch vor dem ersten Advent fortsetzen können, muss es aber noch komplett schreiben (im Kopf ist es fertig). Nebenbei kommen auch weitere Geschichten von mir, die zum Teil auch schon fertig sind. ;-) Also: Stay Tuned.... next chapter cumming!
11/2/23, 6:39 AM
Such a great premise, but then it didn't quite go in the way I was expecting and hoping. I know I'm probably too obsessed with characterization, but since you briefly introduced two supporting characters (Pete and Tim), I wanted to see more of how they interacted normally, then witness as they slowly changed and became obsessed with drinking the Bull Milk. For me, that's the erotic heart of the story, and I wanted you to spend more time showing precisely how the individual men had changed (becoming a brainwashed collective) rather than just telling us about "the silent, almost robotic way the the men moved." I'd love to take a stab at writing a story using this same basic premise, if I can only find free time to write in 2024.
11/2/23, 4:31 AM
We need more of that incredibly hot story! A new chapter please!
11/2/23, 2:28 AM
Whoa. I love ur writing . This is brilliantly done
11/2/23, 2:04 AM
So so good
Mar 19, 2013
11/2/23, 1:45 AM
Think about this one from time to time. The brother on brother is sexy. Plus I try to pretend the transformative kiss was successful on the dad and how hot that would be too 😈