Recent Comments

10/29/23, 1:32 PM
This is a really great story. If I could make a suggestion, if you make a sequel, explain why the dad is distant? Is he normally attracted to his son? Did he set this all up? I would love to read more about Ben and his exploits with his dad.

10/29/23, 7:19 PM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) Thanks! I admit I didn't expand on some details since this was conceptualized as a one-shot story. But there are certainly enough loose ends that I might add to this in the future!
Ben
10/29/23, 6:27 PM
Great story!! I love pikmin too!!
Ab3
10/29/23, 5:57 PM
Waiting for father, bf and brother orgy in the woods.. please make it possible soon
10/29/23, 5:14 PM
A lot of fun and very hot. Great job!

10/29/23, 5:50 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
10/29/23, 4:32 AM
Outstanding story. I have to admit, I settled in for a fun read and wasn't expecting to end up being so incredibly hot given the tongue-in-cheek meta nature of it. But, scorching it ended up being. Well done. Great little twists on tropes and a traditional potential continuation option at the end. Fantastic work.

10/29/23, 5:49 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Oh, thank you for this comment! I'll admit one of my goals with this story was "I want readers to laugh hard *and* orgasm hard!" So hearing that it worked so well for you on this level (and even surprised you in the process 😁) is really great to hear. Thank you!
10/29/23, 5:45 PM
So in love with this story. Can’t wait to see it get out of hand πŸ₯΅
10/28/23, 10:39 PM
You simply MUST continue, October, November, contest or no. I could not care less. Your work is incredible and fun and sexy and charming and funny and SEXY and brainmelty and of course **SEXY**.

10/29/23, 5:18 PM
@[brium](/user/show/10011305) Hahaha thank you!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! And who knows, maybe it will continue... πŸ˜‰ πŸŽƒ πŸ‘» No promises, though!
Anonymous
10/29/23, 5:04 PM
Part 9???
10/28/23, 8:15 PM
That was epic. Clever, compelling, hot, and FUNNY!

10/29/23, 4:59 PM
@[Max Ryon](/user/show/19159) Thank you!! I'm really glad you liked it!
10/28/23, 7:11 PM
AHOY! That was excellent. So many clever lines. Love a good meta story.

10/29/23, 4:52 PM
@[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) Thank you! As someone who really enjoys your meta stories, this is high praise. πŸ˜„