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Oct 27, 2023
10/28/23, 9:58 AM
This was very hot.

10/28/23, 1:30 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Glad you liked it! Kind of a fantasy of mine (duh, right?). One day....
Nutiper
10/27/23, 5:11 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter! It's fun, and hot, and I love all the different character dynamics too. I do wonder if it might be worth working with a proofreader to add in more paragraph breaks to make it easier to read on a screen? It's a fantastic first chapter, and it'd be a shame if not as many people read it just because they're struggling with the run-on paragraphs... But yeah, I really like the story so far, and am looking forward to reading more!

Anonymous
10/28/23, 1:28 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Thank you for the feedback! That’s definitely something I will work on with the next chapter
Anonymous
10/28/23, 12:51 PM
What a hot chapter! I'd love to read more about Mikey's daddy. Reading about his fat, hairy daddycunt getting rimmed by younger fratboys was great!
10/28/23, 8:45 AM
Agree with the above, really love that you started bringing some actual pathos in there. That's what separates some of the true classics of the genre from basic spank fodder. This is a really creative an exciting spin on a pretty standard MC story - fantastic work drawing the absolute best out of the material!
10/28/23, 8:33 AM
Me gusta mucho la idea... igual le falta pulir un poco la escritura, pero vas por buen camino :3 sigue escribiendo, ya quiero la siguiente parte 💙
10/28/23, 8:28 AM
Love the Captain Underpants thing. I used to read those with my brother when I was young. Far hotter when it happens to the school jock than some dumpy principal!
Rordrigo
10/28/23, 2:49 AM
Awesome! I hope you do a part 2 and give more detailed sex 🥵🥵

10/28/23, 7:28 AM
@Rordrigo A part 2 probably, detailed sex probably not :laughing:
Hyphyno
10/28/23, 5:31 AM
This was so freaking hot! The dominating factor is so strong in this Series. And the dominated characters and their oblivious transformations were very well detailed. You are a very skillful writer!
10/28/23, 2:01 AM
I love this story, the distorted sense of reality that the family has is fascinating, specially because while Ethan completely accepts the reality that he is deeply hypnotized, Matt and Sean have more or less instead convinced themselves this is just what their reality is. Great chapter overall~
Oct 27, 2023
10/27/23, 9:42 PM
Great story! Quick and dirty with an excellent twist. Well done.

10/27/23, 10:41 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thank you! I really appreciate it. Let me know if there's a storyline you'd like to see -- love working for approval ;)