Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/28/23, 12:51 PM
What a hot chapter! I'd love to read more about Mikey's daddy. Reading about his fat, hairy daddycunt getting rimmed by younger fratboys was great!
10/28/23, 8:45 AM
Agree with the above, really love that you started bringing some actual pathos in there. That's what separates some of the true classics of the genre from basic spank fodder. This is a really creative an exciting spin on a pretty standard MC story - fantastic work drawing the absolute best out of the material!
10/28/23, 8:33 AM
Me gusta mucho la idea... igual le falta pulir un poco la escritura, pero vas por buen camino :3 sigue escribiendo, ya quiero la siguiente parte 💙
10/28/23, 8:28 AM
Love the Captain Underpants thing. I used to read those with my brother when I was young. Far hotter when it happens to the school jock than some dumpy principal!
Rordrigo
10/28/23, 2:49 AM
Awesome! I hope you do a part 2 and give more detailed sex 🥵🥵

10/28/23, 7:28 AM
@Rordrigo A part 2 probably, detailed sex probably not :laughing:
Hyphyno
10/28/23, 5:31 AM
This was so freaking hot! The dominating factor is so strong in this Series. And the dominated characters and their oblivious transformations were very well detailed. You are a very skillful writer!
10/28/23, 2:01 AM
I love this story, the distorted sense of reality that the family has is fascinating, specially because while Ethan completely accepts the reality that he is deeply hypnotized, Matt and Sean have more or less instead convinced themselves this is just what their reality is. Great chapter overall~
Oct 27, 2023
10/27/23, 9:42 PM
Great story! Quick and dirty with an excellent twist. Well done.

10/27/23, 10:41 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thank you! I really appreciate it. Let me know if there's a storyline you'd like to see -- love working for approval ;)
10/3/22, 8:41 PM
Hello folks ok so I kinda lost my confidence. I felt I was a bad writer and can’t seem to get into writing. Can you 1 comment if you’d like more and 2 if you are an experienced dominant please contact me below too. I’d like to speak to you

11/29/22, 3:59 AM
@[Clown boi](/user/show/309338) Please write more this is a hot story. Thank you.

Anonymous
5/2/23, 8:35 PM
@[Redneck Cubby](/user/show/2354224) Write more!!!

anon
10/27/23, 8:08 PM
@[Clown boi](/user/show/309338) hope you are seeing these eager comments! would love another chapter in this saga
10/27/23, 5:40 PM
Oooof. No idea why I hadn’t read this before. Good lord, it’s well done! Hoping for more from someone. I’ve got so many stories I’m working on right now, but, man, this universe would be fun to add to!

10/27/23, 7:53 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Was really hoping someone would shoulder writing something for *me* for a change but so far it doesn't seem to have panned out! :P Thanks for the kind words, and glad you enjoyed!