Recent Comments

10/28/23, 3:02 PM
I’m really digging these quick straight boy dominations! Keep up the great work!
10/28/23, 2:57 PM
Holy f! This is incredible. The transformation process - you describe it brilliantly! Having Ezra restrained and watch, so he knows what's about to happen to him makes it even better.
10/28/23, 2:43 PM
Wow. This is hot. And really well-written, well-paced.
Aug 25, 2023
Toevah
8/27/23, 9:50 AM
Your stories are a rare pleasure. They really remind me of Raymond Carver’s

10/28/23, 1:34 PM
@Toevah Wow! Thank you, Toevah! This made my day.
Oct 27, 2023
10/28/23, 9:58 AM
This was very hot.

10/28/23, 1:30 PM
@[GiveInToTheMusk](/user/show/909380) Glad you liked it! Kind of a fantasy of mine (duh, right?). One day....
Nutiper
10/27/23, 5:11 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter! It's fun, and hot, and I love all the different character dynamics too. I do wonder if it might be worth working with a proofreader to add in more paragraph breaks to make it easier to read on a screen? It's a fantastic first chapter, and it'd be a shame if not as many people read it just because they're struggling with the run-on paragraphs... But yeah, I really like the story so far, and am looking forward to reading more!

Anonymous
10/28/23, 1:28 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) Thank you for the feedback! That’s definitely something I will work on with the next chapter
Anonymous
10/28/23, 12:51 PM
What a hot chapter! I'd love to read more about Mikey's daddy. Reading about his fat, hairy daddycunt getting rimmed by younger fratboys was great!
10/28/23, 8:45 AM
Agree with the above, really love that you started bringing some actual pathos in there. That's what separates some of the true classics of the genre from basic spank fodder. This is a really creative an exciting spin on a pretty standard MC story - fantastic work drawing the absolute best out of the material!
10/28/23, 8:33 AM
Me gusta mucho la idea... igual le falta pulir un poco la escritura, pero vas por buen camino :3 sigue escribiendo, ya quiero la siguiente parte 💙
10/28/23, 8:28 AM
Love the Captain Underpants thing. I used to read those with my brother when I was young. Far hotter when it happens to the school jock than some dumpy principal!