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10/27/23, 1:23 PM
I liked this story, it was well written and toxic masculinity is an important topic to be talked about. I liked the little episodes of Andrew's childhood, the bit about the toy was my favourite but I could relate to the scraped knee one most. I was a little confused about the constant references to the temperature. Was this an attempt to tie back to the idea of warmth in "warm summer rain" and how it isn't so bad? Also justice for Sergio πŸ₯Ί

10/27/23, 1:34 PM
@[A Possession A Day](/user/show/1060663) I just wanted to keep the fact that it is summer in the reader's mind, hence why it was mentioned multiple times. In a medium without visuals, it's a bit tricky to keep certain details alive as the story progresses. Afterall, it is kind of relevant to the ending scene. If it was a cold shower, it would probably be more uncomfortable. But it was specifically supposed to be not a big deal.
Oct 26, 2023
10/27/23, 5:10 AM
So so naughty! bravo!!

10/27/23, 1:23 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Many thanks.
Oct 26, 2023
10/27/23, 4:48 AM
I do hope you are going to continue this - it’s refreshingly original compared to a lot of the generic tripe on here. Well-written, too. I want to know what happens to King Triton next!

10/27/23, 1:23 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) Thank you. I don't currently have a continuation planned but you never know. You can rest assured though that poor King Triton is probably in for a doozy!
10/27/23, 11:55 AM
Oooh, they are in trouble, hopefully nothing happens to the people who got slammed against the wall
10/27/23, 10:30 AM
Nice first entry. Can't wait to read more young guys being controlled. Good work.
10/27/23, 9:45 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
Sep 6, 2023
10/27/23, 6:15 AM
Great story
10/27/23, 5:59 AM
That was amazing. Well done!!
10/27/23, 5:05 AM
😍😍🀩🀩
10/27/23, 4:03 AM
GREAT story!!!