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Anonymous
10/26/23, 7:28 PM
easily one of the best stories / series on this website
mic
10/26/23, 7:27 PM
fucking hot story, please more, great work ideas, please more keeping wallets and packing in your back pocket, please more of your suggestions for their brain, great work
mic
10/26/23, 6:59 PM
fucking hot story, one of the best,love it- the tricking gaining the first time for everything, the debt working off and increasing, trick more dumb guys, please more, love your ideas writing style etc. so hot,enlarge his nipples, trample his balls to dust...
Ab3
10/26/23, 5:44 PM
Damn this one is awesome.... Need more parts.. it's hot and erotic...
10/24/23, 2:19 AM
I really appreciate how the dad's fate is not yet set in stone. Though the reversed roles is a great twist of irony. I suspect he will no longer be 'useful' after he completes his mission and will become Hank's rubber pup. And the revelation from Tri-Hard as he sees Freedom break like that. He realizes this is better than what he planned. Its such a lightbulb moment. I can understand how he felt cheated. He got outdone by his own 'soldier.' Yet reading how all those soldiers are in proper rubber was fitting. It where they belong. Is the rubber permanent? And I suspect that dad is going to have an easy time catching the two boys. They get some quite time to recoup and they just fall down the rabbit hole instead. They are making their capture too easy now that Henry is stuck as a doll. I hope Freedom takes Nick too. It would be so simple. Expect for the inhibitor he has. Does it just work on Henry or can he use it against Freedom too? And if Nick is captured too, what would he be? What kind of training would he get from Hank? How will Hank train Freedom to be a rubber pup if that is still the outcome? Or Henry? He seems to have the other three soldiers in hand doing something. And he has the authority and dominance to control Nick too. I'm already wanting the next chapter. Though if I may be both greedy and a bit critical, I would hope that more detail went into the rubber suiting parts. This moment of their submission and transformation is such a pivotal moment. It has felt a bit flat and rushed in past parts. Maybe greater depth in how they feel? How the rubber gradually seals them in; instead of feet to waist to neck. To really draw out the experience of it. And how they react to it then and how it effects them afterward.

10/24/23, 1:44 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) So many questions! I'll answer the one that I can without going into the contents of the next chapter,... The rubber on the soldiers is _mostly_ permanent. They're sealed inside with no way to remove the suits without tearing them. That said, the suits are also intended to be easily replaceable thanks to **Tri-Hard's** machines. The boys can be stripped, shaved and cleaned when needed. As for your criticism; it is fair and I'll take it on board. I do agree and it had crossed my mind, but I'll think about it more. Thanks again!

10/25/23, 7:24 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) I forgot to mention that I really liked the null bulges in the suits. All they need now is a padlock on them just to make it clear. Keeping them trapped and eager and very horny. And thanks for the consideration.

10/26/23, 5:42 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) No problem! Hope you like the next chapter when it's done!
10/26/23, 5:26 PM
One of the things I love most about both of you is the escalation of the sexual frenzies and romps. Just a stroll through slight horniness at first, but by the end it's no holds barred (no holes barred?), frantic sexcapades, and I'm there for it each and every time. This was no exception!
Oct 26, 2023
10/26/23, 4:51 PM
Super hot! I love fairy tale fiction. And I love your writing! Bravo
mic
10/26/23, 3:17 PM
wow hot ideas, please more,transform more guys like that, more
10/26/23, 1:10 PM
Any more to this story?
Anonymous
10/26/23, 9:14 AM
Love the idea of hypnosis and hair cutting/shampooing. Wish I had a barber like that. Hope to see more stories that involve barbers and shampooing