Recent Comments

10/27/23, 10:30 AM
Nice first entry. Can't wait to read more young guys being controlled. Good work.
10/27/23, 9:45 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
Sep 6, 2023
10/27/23, 6:15 AM
Great story
10/27/23, 5:59 AM
That was amazing. Well done!!
10/27/23, 5:05 AM
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10/27/23, 4:03 AM
GREAT story!!!
10/27/23, 3:47 AM
This is the BEST there is... WOW!
10/27/23, 3:20 AM
Also, yes, the bit with the dog was very sweet. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
10/27/23, 3:19 AM
There were moments here where my breath literally hitched, and in places I wouldn't have expected. Normally the thing I love about the average GSS story is the removal of agency, the making real of kinks I wouldn't in a billion years want to be subjected to in real life. But military brainwashing without the military, but with the ... accoutrements, for want of a better term, and with a real actual military man doing it? Jesus. Didn't even know I had that kink. And playing it out in a more realistic scenario _really_ works here. All of which is to say, so far, this has been an amazing read.
10/26/23, 1:15 PM
Nice beginning. i’m looking forward to seeing how you answer the questions you raise.

10/27/23, 2:47 AM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Thanks! Hope it won't disappoint. Have a lot of ideas, but while writing realized that need to begin with something simple. In second chapter plan to go a lot further. Guess we'll see how it'll turn out soon.