Recent Comments

10/24/23, 9:52 PM
So nice to see that Martin got what he wanted in the end and that the men were all erased and turned into drones. Nothing better than irrevocable permanence, after all!
10/24/23, 7:07 PM
A promising debut. Well done.
louise faggot
10/24/23, 2:45 PM
love the contol uoyou have Dad
Oct 21, 2023
10/24/23, 2:31 PM
The story is enjoyable but i advise you to paragraph more. It is very hard to read when it's just one giant block of text.
10/23/23, 8:20 PM
👍👍👍👍👍

10/24/23, 1:24 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) :+1::+1::+1::+1::+1:
10/24/23, 1:18 PM
I agree with Cutlerfan, a little unfair to the innocents but a nice story of balding. I would have liked a slowing down of the physical transformations as the pace was pretty rapid but that was just me. Look forward to more of your work.
10/24/23, 8:55 AM
So intriguing!
10/24/23, 6:38 AM
Gradual changes, muscle growth, and romantic to boot! Derek, you are a master.

10/24/23, 6:56 AM
Thanks @[Max Ryon](/user/show/19159), I was just thinking I needed a dopamine hit ;) I don’t think I’ve read this story since I posted it… maybe 12 years ago? I might have to give it another look.
Jan 4, 2007
10/24/23, 6:23 AM
Great story, I find myself coming back to it repeatedly!
10/24/23, 6:19 AM
More fwminization pleae. Love it x