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10/24/23, 12:04 AM
Would have liked more emphasis on the transformation, the end was a bit too nasty for my taste but to each their own.
10/23/23, 9:02 PM
Hot story mate. Can't wait to read what happens next

Nova
10/23/23, 11:02 PM
@[Atlas](/user/show/1003666) Thanks for the reply! Hopefully you like part 2 just as much. Part 1 was like building the border of a puzzle. I personally like the next part more. If you have any feedback I’d be happy to hear 😊
Aug 15, 2021
10/23/23, 9:47 PM
Short and sweet. Had my cock leaking pretty quickly into the story. Great writing.
TW
10/23/23, 3:54 PM
Wow, another fantastic chapter. It’s so impressive how you’re able to switch between each of the characters’ perspectives in such a natural way. I also love how implicitly open-ended all of these outcomes can be, which only leaves us readers on the (literal) edge. The two boys, lovingly reunited, but perhaps Duty Boy still finds himself deeply corrupted by Tri-Hard’s illusion; Mister Freedom, torn between his Master and his handler, a seemingly unknown lughead - someone so far below a superhero. And the rubber uniform replicas! I can’t imagine how Henry will respond to seeing it. I can only look forward to the worst for these poor heroes. 😉

10/23/23, 4:53 PM
@TW Thank you! I'm really glad you're enjoying it! I _do_ wonder what will happen in the end! AH! But, maybe there's still a twist to come,...! Who knows,... ;)
10/23/23, 2:57 PM
I would love to see these two thralls meeting with their friends and expanding Master’s influence in addition to preparing for the family reunion that is sure to be a memorable affair.
Anonymous
10/23/23, 9:31 AM
Another good chapter. So, as usual, I have a lot of thoughts -- though I'll probably need a minute to gather and articulate them all. For now I'll just say that I love the continuing development of Nick and Henry's relationship, and am intrigued by Hank's rebellious streak. Plus, it always warms my heart to see more dudes in rubber(which, as everyone knows, is their natural habitat). Oh, and how can I forget the "Duty Doll" scene! It's everything I could've hoped for! Or it would be, except for one thing․․․․ It's nothing, really․․․․ It's just...well․․․․ Henry's not․․․․ He's not a "DOLLY," okay?! He's an authentic, life-size ~~mint condition~~ heavily-used first edition 2004 Duty Boy ***ACTION FIGURE***, complete with posable joints and a pump-action bulge that spurts real pre-cum when you call him "Super Bitch"!! Jeez․․․․ (Sorry, just had to get that off my chest :laughing: )

10/23/23, 1:02 PM
@Anonymous Oh, you know that's where the pair are heading,... just, maybe not when they're already exhausted and with 'mom' still up somewhere in the house! They won't admit it, but the boys are still pretty shaken up too. When they get some _real_ alone time,... down the rabbit hole they'll go!
Anonymous
10/23/23, 12:44 PM
one hot story… and one hot chapter… scotts’s conversion was amazingly told… the art work is also extraordinary!!! thanks for sharing it all…
Anonymous
10/23/23, 12:22 PM
Excellent
10/23/23, 9:05 AM
Really cool, so hyped for what's next! (Minor nick-pick, but re-reading the story, Jess had green eyes in chapter 2, but he now has blue since several chapters)
Anonymous
10/23/23, 8:37 AM
This is great looking forward to the next part!