Recent Comments

10/24/23, 4:09 PM
I saw the title and I just had to read it. And it turned out to be way hotter than I was expecting. Outstanding work, honestly.

10/25/23, 12:22 AM
@[Wishful Thinking](/user/show/958307) I can see why! We'll chalk it up to coincidence! :wink: Thank you for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed!
Anonymous
10/24/23, 11:58 PM
Any thoughts on when another chapter might drop? Please!
10/24/23, 9:52 PM
So nice to see that Martin got what he wanted in the end and that the men were all erased and turned into drones. Nothing better than irrevocable permanence, after all!
10/24/23, 7:07 PM
A promising debut. Well done.
louise faggot
10/24/23, 2:45 PM
love the contol uoyou have Dad
Oct 21, 2023
10/24/23, 2:31 PM
The story is enjoyable but i advise you to paragraph more. It is very hard to read when it's just one giant block of text.
10/23/23, 8:20 PM
👍👍👍👍👍

10/24/23, 1:24 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) :+1::+1::+1::+1::+1:
10/24/23, 1:18 PM
I agree with Cutlerfan, a little unfair to the innocents but a nice story of balding. I would have liked a slowing down of the physical transformations as the pace was pretty rapid but that was just me. Look forward to more of your work.
10/24/23, 8:55 AM
So intriguing!
10/24/23, 6:38 AM
Gradual changes, muscle growth, and romantic to boot! Derek, you are a master.

10/24/23, 6:56 AM
Thanks @[Max Ryon](/user/show/19159), I was just thinking I needed a dopamine hit ;) I don’t think I’ve read this story since I posted it… maybe 12 years ago? I might have to give it another look.