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10/20/23, 4:33 AM
Very interesting story and I can't wait to read the rest of it. bvstard.ai's images are great. I use Midjourney too, so I watch his Instagram with technical interest. Thanks also for sharing his talent.
10/20/23, 4:05 AM
Thank you so much everyone for the really kind comments! @Anonymous, @Nocturne13, @Evan Jackson, @Drake Nightstorm, thanks for reading and commenting, I appreciate it! I'm so glad you guys liked it. @absman420 and @Derek Williams, I've been a fan of your guys' work for some time now, thank you so much for reading and for the feedback! @BlindSeer0, thank you for that wonderful review! I can't believe there's another story based on the same book, I must have missed it! Glad mine explored different territory. Yeah, I didn't just want to repeat the book's twist of the reflections replacing them. I'm glad you liked the ambiguity. This wasn't a story I felt needed too much explanation or backstory :) For those curious about the original book, it was called "Let's Get Invisible." @Derek Williams I know what you mean about the book embedding itself, haha. The addictive nature of the mirror and the assimilation goals of the evil reflections definitely freaked me out a bit back then, and I tried to capture aspects of both in my story.
10/20/23, 3:30 AM
This is so hot and a nice of a twist
10/20/23, 3:20 AM
What’d Tyler say to Hyun?
10/20/23, 2:23 AM
How was Matty taken?
10/15/23, 8:22 AM
Damiens name got changed to danny it seems?

10/20/23, 2:21 AM
@[BlondieBoy](/user/show/2505879) Fixed!
10/20/23, 2:18 AM
One of my fav stories It’d be hot if there was an alt path where BJ took some of what Donnie was offering him
Oct 18, 2023
Alexandre
10/19/23, 6:06 PM
Man, you did great, the only sorta criticism I could give it's that we don't really know when the change happens but that might be a conscious decision, and that the "gays, whichs is everyone" bit is just a bit clunky, besides that gj dude

10/19/23, 9:56 PM
@[Alexandre](/user/show/10023390) Yeah, the change being unclear was a choice. If I ever get around to writing a new story, I think I'll try to make it a bit more obvious, just to see how that reads. Thanks for reading!
Oct 18, 2023
Lampshade15
10/18/23, 10:46 PM
Fuckkk, papa being like a dom power bottom sucking his sons/cum dispensers dry is so hot. Great first story, I'd love to read more of your work!

10/19/23, 9:54 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) It honestly wrote it itself into that ending. I'm glad that you liked it!
Oct 18, 2023
10/18/23, 9:57 PM
Great story! I'm a big fan of the present tense. My current work-in-progress, my new novel, is in present tense. It's a challenge because you have to show every moment as it happens. You did a great job here -- well done!

10/19/23, 9:53 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Wow thanks! I was pretty nervous posting, but all the encouragement is definitely encouraging. And I think I'll keep experimenting with present tense, to emulate the great, as they say. (Do they say that? I think there's a specific parlance for it)