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10/20/23, 2:18 AM
One of my fav stories It’d be hot if there was an alt path where BJ took some of what Donnie was offering him
Oct 18, 2023
Alexandre
10/19/23, 6:06 PM
Man, you did great, the only sorta criticism I could give it's that we don't really know when the change happens but that might be a conscious decision, and that the "gays, whichs is everyone" bit is just a bit clunky, besides that gj dude

10/19/23, 9:56 PM
@[Alexandre](/user/show/10023390) Yeah, the change being unclear was a choice. If I ever get around to writing a new story, I think I'll try to make it a bit more obvious, just to see how that reads. Thanks for reading!
Oct 18, 2023
Lampshade15
10/18/23, 10:46 PM
Fuckkk, papa being like a dom power bottom sucking his sons/cum dispensers dry is so hot. Great first story, I'd love to read more of your work!

10/19/23, 9:54 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) It honestly wrote it itself into that ending. I'm glad that you liked it!
Oct 18, 2023
10/18/23, 9:57 PM
Great story! I'm a big fan of the present tense. My current work-in-progress, my new novel, is in present tense. It's a challenge because you have to show every moment as it happens. You did a great job here -- well done!

10/19/23, 9:53 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Wow thanks! I was pretty nervous posting, but all the encouragement is definitely encouraging. And I think I'll keep experimenting with present tense, to emulate the great, as they say. (Do they say that? I think there's a specific parlance for it)
Anonymous
10/19/23, 9:01 PM
Great, Nice build - up
10/19/23, 7:46 PM
Great story can’t wait for the next chapter
10/19/23, 6:59 PM
This was a really engaging story with sort of a dark psychosexual feel to it, a truly guilty pleasure for me. Thanks for sharing it with us!
10/19/23, 5:28 PM
Che puntata! I ragazzi hanno scoperto il complotto di Gio, Antonio e Paolo hanno intrapreso un qualcosa di nuovo ed importante tra di loro, e sembra che Marco è stato l'ulteriore vittima all'accademia. Mi chiedo se Antonio e Paolo riusciranno a sconfiggere Gio e smascherare il suo complice, il comandante. Il misto di passione e pericolo è davvero efficace e non vedo l'ora di tornare all'accademia!
Anonymous
10/19/23, 4:53 PM
hot hot hot!!!