I hope the author doesn’t abandon the story. And if he does, let him let someone finish it if no one minds. ​

There's probably something in this story that I didn't really develop. And it's my fault for not doing that. It's kind of hard to explain but I'll do my best. There are ideas in film, literature and art that suggests that there's a metaphorical hole in all men's hearts. That this hole can never be filled. And it seems to explain why we suffer from greed, cruelty, obsessions and pretty much everything that makes man bad. That man is constantly searching for something to fill this hole. Do you guys know what I'm talking about? Well, in my experience, it seems that man is only satisfied, is at that climax ... that amazing awesome moment of sexual gratification. But that moment can feel so fleeting. Just as soon as we reach it, we can't maintain it. So, my idea was: what if when we reached that moment, it was done so in such a way that we connected permanently with other men. And through that connection, it filled in that hole. And the more men that joined and bonded, the greater and stronger the connection become. This idea was hard to convey in the story. Simply because each chapter is told from the perspective of a character. And these characters have a limited understanding. And because they're sorta caught unaware by the situation, they don't really understand what's happening to them. They can only respond by the overwhelming desire to be joined and make that connection. Also, a friend asked me how I get ideas for my many stories. In the case of The Male Order, this whole story evolved out of a BVSTARD.AI's image. It's the image depicted in this chapter. I captioned it as Subject-9 (the man squatting down, with his hands fused into the ground). Sometimes, when I see something, my mind wants to explore what I'm seeing. In this case, I was so turned on by the image, I wanted to know who this man was. And more importantly, I wanted to be this man. For me, I saw a handsome man wearing a fabulous rubber suit. His hands were fused to the surface, so I assumed he had some kind of connection to the environment. His face is partially in shadow, given him a tranquil appearance. And his eyes are also in shadow, almost making it appear that he's "powered down" ... like he's in some kind of meditative state. My imagination immediately got the best of me, and created this story. So to answer this friend's question: I usually get my story ideas from the climax. I see the ending first. In this case, I saw a massive collection of men, squatting down on the haunches, being connected into a great community. So then, I had to work backwards. I had to fill in the gaps, explaining how all these men came to exist in this community. I had to explain how he (or we) would eventually end up in these rubberized bodies. And that's how I started writing Step 1. So when writing my stories, I usually know the destination. I just have to figure out the journey.

Thanks for another great story, Jack. Deeply dark, but so much fun.

so fucking hot, please skullfuck and dumb more guys down, even permanent, so hot, want too, a dream

Hot, love it. Great story

I love reading Johnny gradually go from stud to bitch. Though I'm also about the side adventure Sammy went on with Devlin. Look forward to more!

An amazing addition to an amazing story! I liked how, just like Ari before him, Andrew saw the unintended consequences of the changes he made. However, I'm kind of worried about Ari calling him pathetic. I hope that Ari won't fall out of love or become exceedingly toxic (not that this situation is so benign). I admit that another reason is that I really like the idea of Ari being dominated by both his dad and Andrew (and maybe also Ryan?). Curious to see where it will go next :)

Please please need more

I really enjoyed this chapter. Turning the arrogant and heartless Joseph into a wimpering defeated person. Domenico is the anti-hero using his power to bring down the bigger evil.

So happy to see this chapter to be updated. I really love how chaotic this concept is. Cant wait to see if we will get an incestous cabin orgy with Ryan added to the mix.