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10/16/23, 10:08 PM
Had to read this again while waiting on @absman420 next novels. What made the jock magical. Was it soaked in the coach's cum and sweat? As Goldy was flexing and Toby had his first taste of cock I really expected coach to slip his cock in Toby's ass. Let his magical cum work from both ends. As his balls absorbed the magic from the fabric his prostate could absorbe some from the source. Clearly the coach was the one wielding the power. I think we need a quicky where coach creates another magic jock strap and teaches a prospective catcher how to properly squat down. Or a wrestler that can't quite make the next weight class.

10/17/23, 9:50 AM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) I have to tell you the honest truth — I’ve never given it any thought at all. The jockstrap was just a device. I’ve no idea it’s origin.

10/17/23, 2:18 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) The coach in the story whispered in his ear as the jock was taking effect. Maybe a few magical words but mainly instructions on how Toby was to serve Goldy. I just wanted to throw that idea out there. Let it awaken an erotic thought in your balls as it bakes. Maybe we all get another story and an orgasm to say thank you. @[absman420](/user/show/162063) I was probably thinking of your other story "The Jocking Tale". The brothers wear Butch's jock and improves their athletic ability. Maybe this coach played at that college and was transformed. Smells like a cross over and little bit like old sex.
Anonymous
10/17/23, 10:13 PM
What happens to the men when connected to the hive-mind , can they contact each other and talk normally inside the hive-mind ?

10/17/23, 11:21 PM
@Anonymous You asked whether “they can contact each other and talk normally inside the hive-mind?” My answer is sorta no. The reason being is there’s not really any need to contact each other. This is because they are of one mind. They are each other. There is a constant, and never-ending flow of communication between any man that has been connected. I'm not sure if anyone noticed but once the men "connect" they no longer speak using sounds. I wanted to write a story in which there is no communication from the converted or assimilated. That way, there would be no monologuing on what the grand scheme was. In fact, I had the scientists go over several cliched possibilities. But we really don't know what their endgame is. But the title of this chapter is "Communion". Communion is defined as “the sharing or exchanging of intimate thoughts and feelings, especially when the exchange is on a mental or spiritual level.” So imagine if your mind and soul are constantly sharing. Everyone else’s mind and spirit is moving in and out of you … through you. So it’s not really contacting; they’re already forever part of you. And all of that is being broadcast out like a beacon, luring more and more men towards the tower. I hope that makes sense.
10/17/23, 9:47 PM
Great ending! I also loved the earlier scene with all the men pointing in the direction of the beacon when asked where "home" is--properly eerie!

10/17/23, 9:57 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Thanks, Hypnothrill. I really hoped that this would be a worthy ending. My idea is that the steps basically repeat at this point. As the area around the tower grows, the broadcast or the transmission also increases in range and potency. And more and more men begin the steps towards communion. And by communion, I meant both that men are unified in a community, and also a somewhat religious experience as they sorta worship the tower. It's weird though that you mention the pointing scene. I hadn't actually planned that scene. I was writing the scene with the doctor talking to the general, and just figured that he would present some kind of scientific experiment. And that just sorta fell out of my head. And as I wrote it, I thought: this is creepy! Men all pointing in a singular direction, and not really being aware or why they're pointing. I wonder if I subconsciously got it from Close Encounters of the Third Kind. I wasn't actively thinking of that movie, but I do remember the scene in which all the men point towards the sky. Maybe that's what inspired me ... it's hard to say. But I just typed it out without really planning it. Sorry if I'm going off on a tangent. But when I first wrote that scene, the men were in the cafeteria, and the women in the gymnasium. And after quickly writing it, and thinking about it, I reversed the locations. I thought it would be appropriate to place the men in the gymnasium. After all, the words origin is Greek for a place that men exercise in the nude. So I thought it would be better to place the men in the gym. So it just shows that I really didn't plan that scene out. And if a writer ever feels the muse, it's best to just write it out and see where your random thoughts take you.
TW
10/17/23, 8:49 PM
Hi! I’ve finally found the time indulge in this story and just wanted to share how fantastic (and devilishly enjoyable) it has been. The trope of a robbed lover is so seldom used, but so incredibly hot - especially with how you’ve executed it. That love and addiction are beyond lust or riches, and the way Tri-Hard used it, hijacking all that Nick instilled in our hero - umph, it just hit all those little quirks in the best of ways. Spying, using Nick’s voice, and then reprogramming him against his previous inclinations. Truth be told, I normally stick to stories with hypno mixed with leather and rubber so I thought it’d be a slow build but, damn, did those earlier chapters exceed my expectations. Thank you for writing this story; excited to see what is to come!

10/17/23, 9:55 PM
@TW Thank you very much! I always appreciate it when people share their personal impressions with me! I hope you enjoy what's still to come as well!
10/17/23, 4:55 PM
Awesome story! Looking forward for the next chapter

10/17/23, 9:40 PM
@[Rocky](/user/show/929617) Thank you! The next chapter is still in the works, but I hope it won't be too long now. :)
Zander
10/17/23, 8:53 PM
Very good
10/17/23, 8:33 PM
Very hot. Love to see the internal conflict and how Dr. Altman's power is working with it. Here's hoping Jayson finds a new life as an out and proud gay athlete.
10/17/23, 8:27 PM
Fun story, but one thing that trips me up is the bathroom question section. Servwnts are told them may ask to use the bathroom, and then are punished when doing so... maybe if wording was reworked it would make it seem more like a trap rather than confusing permissions. Regardless, a small detail in an otherwise great story so far
10/17/23, 6:29 PM
NEED more of this. So hot
10/17/23, 4:10 PM
Is this parody? Satire?