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10/16/23, 3:13 PM
Holy crap! How exciting to have more of this amazing story!! Keep up the amazing work, my friend...maybe it's because of that file cabinet I found with a drawer labeled Max Lode that I put 'writing more File it Away' at the front of the stack of papers? :P

10/16/23, 5:37 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I do as Edlam commands :laughing:
10/16/23, 2:49 AM
I think this is a good idea but it's all little chaotic with everyone having a pendant at once. I think it would have been more optimal to have each of them steal the pendant from each other.

10/16/23, 5:36 PM
@[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) It is indeed chaotic! That's actually why i list the rules in effect on X person at the end of each chapter, to try help you (and me!) keep track. I'll do my best to keep it as ordered chaos as i can. Thanks for the comment!
10/15/23, 11:52 PM
I'm having a difficult time figuring out who's talking to whom throughout, which makes it a very confusing read.

10/16/23, 5:35 PM
@[gregz](/user/show/605962) Apologies for any confusion! I've been trying to avoid a procession of _X said's_, _Y asked's_, _Z thought's_ and mix it up a bit. I'll see if i can find a balance for future chapters.
10/15/23, 11:45 PM
This story is progressing so well! Such a great idea. Looking forward to seeing the next round of changes. Personally, I'm actually hoping the perspective just switches back and forth between Aaron and Jack. I feel like Matt's perspective might be a little predictable as the douchey jock. Perhaps I'll be proven wrong, though. :blush:

10/16/23, 5:33 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Thanks for your feedback and compliments! I can indeed confirm that the next chapter will be from Matt's perspective. Hopefully the direction i'm taking him will surprise you a little bit!
10/16/23, 7:44 AM
*sighs* you had to go and include a piss fetish. Welp. Guess I'll hope some other series comes along for me to get excited about and actively anticipate. Good luck with this one, for a first time attempt you're showing a lot of skill at the craft, even if the story is going in directions that I'm not comfortable with.

10/16/23, 5:31 PM
@[goodbiforever](/user/show/1090266) Ah i'm really sorry to disappoint, friend. I've been visiting this site since the NCMC days and am all too familiar with the feeling you get when a seemingly good story/series takes a turn in a direction you don't like. The good news is that i'm very much a take it or leave it kinda guy with that particular kink, i just felt it clicked with the direction i was wanting to take the Jack/Matt interactions. So i hope to see you again for any future story/series which have a good chance of being more up your alley. Thanks again for the feedback and words of encouragement!
10/16/23, 4:23 PM
I'm one for runing Bryan, but not corrupting him. The perversity of this comes from Bryan being a good person and good looking guy who has everything in life, the opposite of Chester. If he gets infected with the corruption, or becomes less attractive, it'd lose the appeal. I want to see Bryan be degraded, all while his mind is left intact and can contemplate his fall from grace and dwelling on it and feeling shame.
10/16/23, 4:09 PM
Start nice hope there comes more
10/16/23, 3:50 PM
I appreciate every author that sits down and invests the time to write and to seek out an audience by publishing no matter the format or genre; kudos to them all. Having acknowledged everyone let me focus on the one that is the master of this genre, namely you. You write so well. The stories you weave capture the essence of submission as well as the essence of responsible domination while staying clear of BDSM cliches. Thank you and I hope you keep writing. This story is aces.
Lampshade15
10/16/23, 1:31 PM
Glad to see a new chapter, such a hot story! Curious to see how horny, insatiable daddy can be kept in check during the cabin trip.
Mind Bender
10/16/23, 12:14 PM
Love it!!! You're so descriptive! This story makes my day. Love this series!❤️