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10/16/23, 5:55 PM
Fuck give me a dad like that🔥🔥🔥
10/16/23, 2:51 PM
Really loving your work. I know some people aren't into everything but I'm really enjoying everything so far.

10/16/23, 5:38 PM
@[BBCody](/user/show/32686) That means a lot! :) Hope the next chapters live up to your expectations!
10/16/23, 5:19 PM
I didnt expect to have an update for this series and this is the best one yet! I’m curious to read how all this unfolds and what happens with Ryan. Anyway, I hope you’ll continue updating!

10/16/23, 5:38 PM
@[Rad Pits](/user/show/2239300) Thank you for sticking with it! I’m glad you enjoyed the update. I hope to have more :crossed_fingers:
Anonymous
10/16/23, 4:28 AM
This is such a great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

10/16/23, 5:38 PM
@Anonymous Thanks so much! Really glad you're enjoying it. I'll get the next chapter published as soon as i can :)
10/16/23, 3:13 PM
Holy crap! How exciting to have more of this amazing story!! Keep up the amazing work, my friend...maybe it's because of that file cabinet I found with a drawer labeled Max Lode that I put 'writing more File it Away' at the front of the stack of papers? :P

10/16/23, 5:37 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) I do as Edlam commands :laughing:
10/16/23, 2:49 AM
I think this is a good idea but it's all little chaotic with everyone having a pendant at once. I think it would have been more optimal to have each of them steal the pendant from each other.

10/16/23, 5:36 PM
@[Hypnofiend23](/user/show/2528896) It is indeed chaotic! That's actually why i list the rules in effect on X person at the end of each chapter, to try help you (and me!) keep track. I'll do my best to keep it as ordered chaos as i can. Thanks for the comment!
10/15/23, 11:52 PM
I'm having a difficult time figuring out who's talking to whom throughout, which makes it a very confusing read.

10/16/23, 5:35 PM
@[gregz](/user/show/605962) Apologies for any confusion! I've been trying to avoid a procession of _X said's_, _Y asked's_, _Z thought's_ and mix it up a bit. I'll see if i can find a balance for future chapters.
10/15/23, 11:45 PM
This story is progressing so well! Such a great idea. Looking forward to seeing the next round of changes. Personally, I'm actually hoping the perspective just switches back and forth between Aaron and Jack. I feel like Matt's perspective might be a little predictable as the douchey jock. Perhaps I'll be proven wrong, though. :blush:

10/16/23, 5:33 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) Thanks for your feedback and compliments! I can indeed confirm that the next chapter will be from Matt's perspective. Hopefully the direction i'm taking him will surprise you a little bit!
10/16/23, 7:44 AM
*sighs* you had to go and include a piss fetish. Welp. Guess I'll hope some other series comes along for me to get excited about and actively anticipate. Good luck with this one, for a first time attempt you're showing a lot of skill at the craft, even if the story is going in directions that I'm not comfortable with.

10/16/23, 5:31 PM
@[goodbiforever](/user/show/1090266) Ah i'm really sorry to disappoint, friend. I've been visiting this site since the NCMC days and am all too familiar with the feeling you get when a seemingly good story/series takes a turn in a direction you don't like. The good news is that i'm very much a take it or leave it kinda guy with that particular kink, i just felt it clicked with the direction i was wanting to take the Jack/Matt interactions. So i hope to see you again for any future story/series which have a good chance of being more up your alley. Thanks again for the feedback and words of encouragement!
10/16/23, 4:23 PM
I'm one for runing Bryan, but not corrupting him. The perversity of this comes from Bryan being a good person and good looking guy who has everything in life, the opposite of Chester. If he gets infected with the corruption, or becomes less attractive, it'd lose the appeal. I want to see Bryan be degraded, all while his mind is left intact and can contemplate his fall from grace and dwelling on it and feeling shame.