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10/15/23, 12:27 PM
Oh Gosh , another great chapter ! I love how Sammy take the upper hand over his brothers. Can’t wait to see the whole John’s fall🔥
Jerry
10/15/23, 10:58 AM
Oh my gosh that is another hit.
Ab3
10/15/23, 10:38 AM
It's going good but TBH it's currently going on 1 sided. Chester also should get some taste of same medicine. Nd yeahhh let's get some fucking too... A bit more than masturbation dude
10/15/23, 8:57 AM
Would love to see more of the ceo being enslaved too
Anonymous
10/14/23, 10:29 AM
Well, it's encouraging to see things start to get back on track. For all his misanthropy, Tri-Hard seemingly fails to grasp something very basic: humans are irreparably broken creatures! If you try to use them *only* as "tools," they're bound to disappoint(not that I'm speaking from experience, or anything...)! It actually reveals a fundamental weakness on his part that he tries to make them into something they're not, instead of working with what he's given. No matter how much brainwashing and chemicals you expose someone to, that discarded, crumpled-up piece of trash called "humanity" tends to rear its ugly head eventually. That's why "tryhards" will always fall short of total control, fixated on easily-manipulated, yet ultimately superficial elements like "body" and "mind" as they are. Tri-Hard tries to go further and *claims* to hold Mister Freedom's soul at the end, but only a natural Dom like Nick can intuit how to truly get inside someone and *own* them in their entirety -- to transform those chaotic human flaws from a gap in their control to a powerful tool to reinforce obedience and build loyalty. After all, isn't "love" just a pretty name we use to dress up the cruelest form of slavery? :wink: I imagine we're heading towards some kind of clash between Nick/Henry and Tri-Hard/Freedom/the Supersoldiers, which...seems pretty lopsided, but I expect there will be more twists to keep the plot from being too predictable. And speaking of twists, there's a part of me that can't help wondering if Tri-Hard is really the biggest, baddest villain this story can muster, or if there's still someone lurking in the shadows who's actually been pulling *everyone*'s strings so far․․․․ Was the original supersoldier program *really* dismantled, or did it just shift to new management? If it *did* continue, what role would Henry play in it? :thinking: **P.S.** Nick *will* finally get a chance to play with his lifesize Duty Boy action figure, right? I know "Duty Boy" is technically gone, and Henry said he doesn't want to be a hero anymore...but for all his care and concern, Nick's still a greedy asshole too! Honestly, I can think of no better sendoff for the hero he so *utterly defeated*: no longer a protector fighting for the innocent, or even a brainwashed goon for his dad's nemesis -- just a toy for his Master to summon on demand whenever He's bored :smiling_imp:

10/14/23, 11:55 AM
@Anonymous There's a lot of thoughts in here, but I can't begin to comment on them without spoilers :p Thank you, though! And I hope your wishes are answered,...

Anonymous
10/15/23, 12:46 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) "A lot of thoughts," huh...yeah, I guess that's me! :sweat_smile: I hope I'm not stepping on your toes with all my speculation and "suggestions," but what can I say? This world you've envisioned just gets my mind going! But, as something of a control freak myself, I can appreciate if you want to ignore everything I've said. Well, except for one. See...I have this cute mental image of Nick pretending to be a total "Mister Freedom fanboy" when he was a kid, and using that as an excuse to hoard a bunch of Duty Boy merch(though he'd never admit it...)! After all, where else would he get that collector's item that he turned into Super Bitch's collar? Anyway, I just think it'd be heartbreaking if he didn't get to live out his boyhood dreams when his favorite hero's *right there* in his ~~clutches~~ arms! :cry:

10/15/23, 1:24 AM
@Anonymous Don't worry! No toes were stepped on in the making of this comment :stuck_out_tongue: However, I must burst your bubble,... or at least dent it a little! Duty Boy merch wouldn't have been around when Nick was a kid! Henry didn't start heroing until he was 16 and had left home-tutoring to attend high school. So, it's been 3-4 years since Duty Boy hit the scene. It wouldn't have taken long for people to jump on the 'new sidekick' bandwagon with merch, but Nick himself was already 18 by this point. Now! I still like the idea that Nick is/was a secret Duty Boy fan. Duty Boy's age wouldn't have been made public, so it's fair for him to be a good 'role model' for a late-teen like Nick would have been. A role model in a tight-fitting costume who just happens to get into some provocative situations that _might_ excite certain discerning onlookers :wink: _Of course_ it's not 'weird' to be a fan of his! He's a bonafide villain-clapping hero! Just,... uh,... don't scrutinize which news reports Nick has clipped on his phone!
Anonymous
10/15/23, 8:43 AM
Spectacular
10/15/23, 7:15 AM
I adore this and I would LOVE to read more!
10/15/23, 6:39 AM
God I love re-reading your work. Such a good story
Leo
10/15/23, 2:58 AM
Thank you so much for continuing this hot story!! Truly one of my favorites on this site. I’m so happy that Dexter has another obedient daddy slave to play with! Please, make the coach divorce his wife and end his miserable marriage. Now that he is madly in love with Dexter, he should propose and have a wedding with his master. Dexter will now own everything that belongs to the coach, his house, car, bank account, etc. I hope you can include this in the next chapter. It would be so sexy!

10/15/23, 3:54 AM
@[Leo](/user/show/988646) Hi. Thanks for the comment. Dexter is 16 years old at this point in the story (and who knows if we'll go beyond that) so there will be no marriage or any legal transfer of assets. Since his slaves are part of his property, he effectively owns anything they own.

Anonymous
10/15/23, 4:56 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Well since Dexter can’t, i think it would be hot if he did make two of his slaves marry each over, like in a twisted power fetish way, like the coach and daddy jimmy, or coach and daddy bruce or even brad and daddy jimmy….
Aug 12, 2023
10/15/23, 4:50 AM
I truly loved this one. Thanks!