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10/15/23, 2:14 AM
So the dad becomes the pet and pup. I like that much better. Hank is going to train him so well to be a good rubber pup. And it would be a comical twist if he get used as a hound to help track down Henry and Nick. Now that Tri-Hard has a working formula he can wrap up loose ends with those two. Yet how those two are going to stay free and still move forward is going to be interesting. How do they fight back? What options do they have? And how will Nick utilize his reacquired control over Nick? He was definitely interested in the rubber Henry is wearing. And yet I cannot help but mimic what others have said earlier. Will there be another major character to join the fray; ie Mom? She is the genius behind the inhibitors. She knows all about their powers and 'inhibitions'. She even gave an inhibitor to Nick that gives him control over Henry. How could that not be intentional unless she is either that confident in things working out or she is fully aware of what is happening. I'm eager for more.

10/15/23, 2:35 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Ahh! More healthy speculation! Rest assured that I appreciate it, even if I must keep my lips sealed :zipper_mouth_face: We'll see how close you are soon enough!
Zander
10/15/23, 1:40 AM
And I really like the story and it’s very exciting. I want to read more and more) but I also want there to be no holes in the plot)
10/15/23, 1:33 AM
Once again a chapter that hits SO many of my buttons! thank you for continuing to update this story, it never fails to improve my day! I cannot wait to read the next parts, I'm interested in how you intend to deal with the genie.
Zander
10/15/23, 1:14 AM
If Chaos is disorder or lack of order (this is what the creatures who endowed Chester with their powers want to achieve). Unless when Chester wins and he stays with Jason (this will not become Order but only for Chester) but still Order (which these creatures want to avoid) Therefore, Chaos, according to this logic and concept, should not work only in Chester’s direction. Therefore, as soon as Chester gets Jason (all his dreams will come true and he will be happy), in the end he and Brian will switch places. I don’t think that this should completely satisfy these creatures of Chaos, since these creatures want Chaos, they will have to give the same powers to Brian. so that he would create even more Chaos and satisfy the desires of creatures? is not it? otherwise it will be strange and stupid, that it will only work towards Chester, but not towards Brian. It's just that if I were a being of Chaos, I would do so) first I would give strength to Chester so that he would fulfill all his dark desires by destroying Brian's life, and then I would use Brian to destroy Chester's ideal life) Damn, that would be very fun) I think this is what the Joker would have done (whom I consider the ideal creature of Chaos and Madness rolled into one) If everything in history is only in favor of Chester, then these will not be creatures of Chaos, but simply creatures who want to somehow change Chester’s life for the better and that’s all. It will be a failure and a plot hole. Therefore, they cannot be called creatures of Chaos, but only creatures of depravity. )

10/15/23, 1:31 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) I’m legit flattered you’re putting so much analysis into my story! I do have lore planned and am endlessly excited for you especially to see it unfold.
10/14/23, 11:33 PM
Wait, wait, wait. How did Jack create that last law? Doesn’t he have to be touching the pendant? Did I miss something?

10/14/23, 11:37 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) My assumption is the "salesman" actually gave pendants to all three brothers, and is enjoying watching the chaos and perversion unfold - remember, the amulets come with perception filter effects, so it makes sense Aaron wouldn't see Jack use HIS.

10/15/23, 1:31 AM
@[goodbiforever](/user/show/1090266) ;)
Anonymous
10/15/23, 1:27 AM
Rocco did not deserve what happened to him. 😈 What's going to happen to the unk next?
10/15/23, 12:47 AM
I love all the Eden and Sammy/Johnny/Eli stories. So hot. Another great chapter. Looks like Sammy may have been making use of that large endowment of his earlier than his brothers. Can't wait for more.
10/15/23, 12:03 AM
Really loving how this story is progressing. So hot!
10/14/23, 11:58 PM
Okay. That helps explain the chapter subtitle too.
Tim
10/14/23, 11:52 PM
Hope a new part is cumming soon!! Kushkyn Must get his revenge on chubbers!!!