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Bucky
10/14/23, 9:47 AM
Hello Manicorn!! I recognized your profile picture from Bluesky and decided I should check out your story! Since it's obvious you have a really good grasp of the Mind Control and Kink aspects of the story, I decided my approach would be to review it like any other fan fiction so here are my thoughts: While I don't know Hercules quite as well in Marvel Comics context, I did think you got his character down very well. Now there WAS a recent example of him crying at the death of his family in Avengers No Way Home issue #8 (2019), but I don't think many people read that series so I don't think anyone would blame you for missing that. Also he was having his emotions fucked with or something. It's not a great book. Alternatively, your story probably isn't 616 canon and may even take place before those events. Either way I think you did a great job with this first chapter and I'm excited to read what else you have! Excited to see your take on the X-Men! Bucky

10/14/23, 8:08 PM
@Bucky Hey, thanks so much for checking out my stuff! It means a lot you follow me on multiple sites. And I loved receiving a review just for how in-character a kink fic like this is. In regards to Hercules, he meant brought to tears through corporal punishment, not through genuine grief or emotion. And you're correct this isn't strictly 616, though it takes more cues from that 'verse than anywhere else. Rather, it's a universe me and my boyfriend created that just happens to include the sexiest parts of any Marvel adaptation we like, so it's kinda a mish-mosh. But that way, any disparity can easily be hand waved if they bother you. If you like the X-Men I think you'll enjoy several chapters down the line that focus on them. One just went up today!
10/14/23, 8:07 PM
Oooh. This premise has lots of potential..
Anonymous
10/14/23, 8:05 PM
The first part of the story was standard hypno and I was wondering when the theme was going to kick in. The spooky slowly grew and was exponentially dark at the end. I'm debating if it's too dark for my liking since Rocco seemed like a good guy but also I found myself wanting to get my hands on Rocco next.
Anonymous
10/14/23, 7:42 PM
Will there ever be a sequel?
10/14/23, 6:57 PM
Great second chapter. It lived up to expectation. Our Johnny is a great bottom jock!
10/14/23, 6:28 PM
I’m waiting for Bryan to be punished by Chester. Shrink his cock, make fat etc.
10/14/23, 6:11 PM
HUGE fan of how this all turned out: I was hoping for that killjoy Phil to get his cum-uppance, and it seems I wasn't alone! Your ideas are both funny and EXTREMELY hot, and both Emmett and you do a good job of hyping the audience up to see what happens next! Hatim is definitely the favorite to win, but I have to say, the idea of shy little Ari ending up making it to the final two to face him is a REALLY appealing thought: just have to see how the vote turns out! (P.S: Just how much is a Gold subscription for the Slut-a-Rama Club? Asking for a friend, I swear. 😅)
10/14/23, 5:30 PM
Ohoho! This series is right down my alley!
X
10/14/23, 4:44 PM
Excellent! I can’t wait for what comes next! , especially of how Coach Jenkins explains all the fun marks he has to his wife and what Dexter does next to him and his adult sons😉
10/14/23, 3:07 PM
I would love to read more of this Story