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May 4, 2025
5/3/25, 6:03 PM
I don't know WTF happened, but in the submission editor this was formatted perfectly. Here it showed up as a mega-block.
X
5/3/25, 6:16 PM
Can we expect a new chapter this month?

5/4/25, 8:11 AM
@X Yes. Hopefully next week.

X
5/4/25, 8:13 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Can’t wait to see the next direction this story wiil go! I hope Dexter gets more Jock Slaves

5/13/25, 5:17 PM
@X Just published the next chapter. It's a half chapter since I cannot finish the entire setting I want to portray. Anyway, wait for the site's approval and I hope you enjoy the next installment.
Tom
5/5/25, 7:11 AM
Looking forward to see how this continues. Great follow up to the first part

5/24/25, 3:58 PM
@Tom Thank you :3
Anonymous
5/3/25, 6:39 PM
Love this story. If you're still writing, I hope you revisit it. PLEEK
May 3, 2025
Zander
5/3/25, 6:46 PM
Not a bad story. The only drawback is the length of the chapters (short) and a little in the process of developing the plot of the interaction of the characters with each other. As a prologue for the first time is not bad, but there is something to strive for.
4/30/25, 11:41 AM
The way I IMMEDIATLY recognized the Prisoner Hypnotizes Guards video :joy:

5/3/25, 7:17 PM
@[Ju4nchu](/user/show/10052688) LOL, yeah, I think just about everyone in the hypnosis community has come across that at some point or another. That one and Delicious, mentioned in the next chapter, are the only two that are based on real porn; the rest I made up.
5/3/25, 7:36 AM
A fantastic start, can’t wait to Liam is drawn towards Noah. I hope it’s a slow burn!

lukas pucci
5/3/25, 8:43 PM
@[icandestroy](/user/show/914356) thank youu!! you won’t the disappointed of you’re into slow burns i promise you ❤️
5/3/25, 8:10 AM
Nice first chapter

lukas pucci
5/3/25, 8:44 PM
@[benelliot](/user/show/909446) ❤️🤤
5/3/25, 3:23 PM
Hot. Can't wait for more

lukas pucci
5/3/25, 8:44 PM
@Jonanator chapter two is done! just tweaking it!