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10/12/23, 5:01 PM
Thanks, NYCBoot. One thing I try to do in each chapter is to add a new element. Once I've run out of things to add, I feel the story has run its course. In Step 1, I really tried to focus on what I called "reception", or the idea that the men were tuning in. So once the men start receiving, that'll naturally lead them towards Step 2 ... their transformation. While Transformation was described a little in Step 1, more was revealed in this chapter. It all started with rvb_ai's image of a man squatting down, with his hands fused into the ground. When I saw that image, I wanted to know what he was doing. And the story built itself within my imagination. There is one more step to go. After the 3 Step process, i imagine that it cycles back and repeats itself in a never ending loop. It's funny how you mentioned you're not the only reader wishing for the black/orange stuff to reach their brain. This writer is right there beside you, wishing the same thing would happen to him.
10/12/23, 4:44 PM
Great story! Want more just like Pigg!
10/12/23, 1:13 AM
yay! loved the Kol series. Glad to see this here, and will definitely be checking out your e-book.

10/12/23, 2:49 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Glad you love the series! Note that the first two books will be familiar stories, revised, to introduce new readers to the series. Starting with book 3, I'll take back up the Svi storyline, which I started on Nifty but have since expanded into a major arc, with multiple new stories. I also will keep adding free stories here. I am currently inspired to wrap up Potato Fuck...
10/11/23, 2:04 PM
I'm so glad to see more of this. This is one of my favorite gay historical fantasy series I've ever read, and I'd be lying if I said I didn't fantasize about being Kol's slut for the night sometimes. :sweat_smile: I'm not sure if you have any intention of giving him a reappearance, but one of my favorite repeats lays of Kol's is Waylan the Wainwright and I'd love to see more of him in the future. I particularly liked the idea of Kol oiling Waylan's body just to show him off. :hot_face:

10/12/23, 2:39 PM
@[grkotter91](/user/show/10016610) Hey, thanks! And, yeah, I love my poor beefy cow, Waylan, too. I'll definitely need to pay him another visit
10/12/23, 2:36 PM
Very hot! Hope to read more about the brothers downfall!
10/12/23, 2:06 PM
I don’t know why I am kneeling in front of the monitor now. ⚫️🟠
Joe
10/12/23, 1:38 PM
Keep the story going. love white to black story.
Zander
10/12/23, 1:29 PM
Thank you for this story, I really liked it and am looking forward to the continuation.
Lampshade15
10/12/23, 12:30 PM
What an excellent story!
nycboot
10/12/23, 12:20 PM
Oh this is so amazing! As far as the plot, it's not really different from the first chapter - but the way you have written it makes all the difference. In chapter 1, we sort of see what happens and realize what humans are up against. And the same thing happens in chapter 2 but the impression is totally different because we are in touch with the internal voices of the Stevens characters. But because we've been through chapter 1, we know what's going to happen and that raises our anticipation and expectation - but that becomes all the more exciting because we didn't expect the internal voices and thoughts and sights of the Stevens clan. To see Big Joe - who we felt we knew before - to watch him transform physical and especially mentally - as he struggles to process the new thoughts and feelings - and becomes something else - it's so wonderful. I'm sure I'm not the only reader who wishes the black/orange rubber stuff would reach into my brain and draw me closer!! You've always been an amazing writer and this shows you still are!!