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10/11/23, 7:01 PM
Every defeated hero deserves to be in rubber! And hopefully a lot more rubber is coming. Though why the overalls and not full rubber? Or even rubber versions of their hero outfits? And if the dad has the same compulsion to give in to more base desires, I am wondering how Tri-Hard will use this to gain his obedience. Tri-Hard doesn't seem like a villian how does the same trick twice. Or is he just going to be be a milking cow? And the idea of Nick becoming a pet sounds really good. A big, buff athlete like him becoming what is hopefully a rubber pet sounds like a great twist. He was having Henry be his toy and bitch. Now he becomes it, just without choice.

10/13/23, 1:17 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Aha! Allow me to clarify. 1) Why overalls instead of full rubber? Because **Tri-Hard** doesn't see Henry as a long-term asset. With a finished formula and complete control, that's when the villain will set his mind to more appropriate apparel,... 2) Carl may share Henry's compulsions, but his sexual identity is very different. Henry unwittingly allowed Nick and **Tri-Hard** to control him because he _is_ a submissive, gay pervert. He may not have known it before, but he sure does now! His dad doesn't find **Tri-Hard** appealing in the same way, so he isn't able to be controlled by him,... yet. 3) The tables being turned on Nick and having _him_ become a slave? My lips are sealed! :zipper_mouth_face: Anyway, thank you! I promise there _is_ more rubber coming, I hope you approve when we get there!
JRL
11/3/20, 9:00 PM
man i hope this slut's father is as hot, hung, and dumb as his older brother

RRR
10/13/23, 12:26 AM
@[JRL](/user/show/984248) Yesss! Please make one with the hot dad!
New Fan
10/13/23, 12:22 AM
I'm usually a fan of explicit penetration, but somehow, the context and background made the kissing quite salivating. . .bravo, Neon Demon.
10/12/23, 11:33 PM
Ooh love the twist, Tyler being part of Aiden's hypnosis. Well even though they are friends, technically he is still part of the bullying problem. He didnt defend him. Hope things with William ane Tyler continues. I feel like they could be a hot couple. Cant wait for Aiden to hypnotize all of the jocks.
10/12/23, 10:38 PM
I just realized a possible outcome from this as I reread it again. That after their current episode, the two cops get outed because of all the surveillance in the building. They are fired and disgraced. And afterwards they can only fall back into the hands of their Master to become 24/7 slaves. Being collared and caged with hopefully some slutty slave uniform. Maybe even being forced to work at places like a nightclub were they perform routines as the cops they once were.
Anonymous
10/12/23, 9:16 PM
Continua por favor
10/12/23, 8:24 PM
Oh wow! This was such an amazing read!!! I enjoyed it so much, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!!!
10/12/23, 7:34 PM
It was hot, but i feel kind of sad for Oliver. I liked the Vampire part the best and would have prefered more of it. That's just me. It was arousing with the Halloween theme as the center point. All in all, i would critizise the length of the erotic transformation scenes as a point where it could be better. More erotic transformation, the setting is good and more vampires for me personally. Got me hard and aroused. :smiley:
Anonymous
10/6/23, 11:28 PM
This is hot, and I sure hope you'll write more! 😍 One thing of note: with the suit described as only having an opening in its ass the description of how he is suited up doesn't make a lot of sense. I had to essentially ignore the inconsistency of his limbs all being covered, his head as of yet uncovered, but the only opening being in the ass so that I could enjoy the arousal of the moment. And boy was it arousing! 🤤

10/12/23, 6:02 PM
@Anonymous Hey I really appreciate this feedback! I'm going to look into editing it so it makes more sense. Glad you enjoyed it nonetheless!
10/12/23, 5:01 PM
Thanks, NYCBoot. One thing I try to do in each chapter is to add a new element. Once I've run out of things to add, I feel the story has run its course. In Step 1, I really tried to focus on what I called "reception", or the idea that the men were tuning in. So once the men start receiving, that'll naturally lead them towards Step 2 ... their transformation. While Transformation was described a little in Step 1, more was revealed in this chapter. It all started with rvb_ai's image of a man squatting down, with his hands fused into the ground. When I saw that image, I wanted to know what he was doing. And the story built itself within my imagination. There is one more step to go. After the 3 Step process, i imagine that it cycles back and repeats itself in a never ending loop. It's funny how you mentioned you're not the only reader wishing for the black/orange stuff to reach their brain. This writer is right there beside you, wishing the same thing would happen to him.