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10/12/23, 7:34 PM
It was hot, but i feel kind of sad for Oliver. I liked the Vampire part the best and would have prefered more of it. That's just me. It was arousing with the Halloween theme as the center point. All in all, i would critizise the length of the erotic transformation scenes as a point where it could be better. More erotic transformation, the setting is good and more vampires for me personally. Got me hard and aroused. :smiley:
Anonymous
10/6/23, 11:28 PM
This is hot, and I sure hope you'll write more! 😍 One thing of note: with the suit described as only having an opening in its ass the description of how he is suited up doesn't make a lot of sense. I had to essentially ignore the inconsistency of his limbs all being covered, his head as of yet uncovered, but the only opening being in the ass so that I could enjoy the arousal of the moment. And boy was it arousing! 🤤

10/12/23, 6:02 PM
@Anonymous Hey I really appreciate this feedback! I'm going to look into editing it so it makes more sense. Glad you enjoyed it nonetheless!
10/12/23, 5:01 PM
Thanks, NYCBoot. One thing I try to do in each chapter is to add a new element. Once I've run out of things to add, I feel the story has run its course. In Step 1, I really tried to focus on what I called "reception", or the idea that the men were tuning in. So once the men start receiving, that'll naturally lead them towards Step 2 ... their transformation. While Transformation was described a little in Step 1, more was revealed in this chapter. It all started with rvb_ai's image of a man squatting down, with his hands fused into the ground. When I saw that image, I wanted to know what he was doing. And the story built itself within my imagination. There is one more step to go. After the 3 Step process, i imagine that it cycles back and repeats itself in a never ending loop. It's funny how you mentioned you're not the only reader wishing for the black/orange stuff to reach their brain. This writer is right there beside you, wishing the same thing would happen to him.
10/12/23, 4:44 PM
Great story! Want more just like Pigg!
10/12/23, 1:13 AM
yay! loved the Kol series. Glad to see this here, and will definitely be checking out your e-book.

10/12/23, 2:49 PM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Glad you love the series! Note that the first two books will be familiar stories, revised, to introduce new readers to the series. Starting with book 3, I'll take back up the Svi storyline, which I started on Nifty but have since expanded into a major arc, with multiple new stories. I also will keep adding free stories here. I am currently inspired to wrap up Potato Fuck...
10/11/23, 2:04 PM
I'm so glad to see more of this. This is one of my favorite gay historical fantasy series I've ever read, and I'd be lying if I said I didn't fantasize about being Kol's slut for the night sometimes. :sweat_smile: I'm not sure if you have any intention of giving him a reappearance, but one of my favorite repeats lays of Kol's is Waylan the Wainwright and I'd love to see more of him in the future. I particularly liked the idea of Kol oiling Waylan's body just to show him off. :hot_face:

10/12/23, 2:39 PM
@[grkotter91](/user/show/10016610) Hey, thanks! And, yeah, I love my poor beefy cow, Waylan, too. I'll definitely need to pay him another visit
10/12/23, 2:36 PM
Very hot! Hope to read more about the brothers downfall!
10/12/23, 2:06 PM
I don’t know why I am kneeling in front of the monitor now. ⚫️🟠
Joe
10/12/23, 1:38 PM
Keep the story going. love white to black story.
Zander
10/12/23, 1:29 PM
Thank you for this story, I really liked it and am looking forward to the continuation.