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10/12/23, 2:06 PM
I don’t know why I am kneeling in front of the monitor now. ⚫️🟠
Joe
10/12/23, 1:38 PM
Keep the story going. love white to black story.
Zander
10/12/23, 1:29 PM
Thank you for this story, I really liked it and am looking forward to the continuation.
Lampshade15
10/12/23, 12:30 PM
What an excellent story!
nycboot
10/12/23, 12:20 PM
Oh this is so amazing! As far as the plot, it's not really different from the first chapter - but the way you have written it makes all the difference. In chapter 1, we sort of see what happens and realize what humans are up against. And the same thing happens in chapter 2 but the impression is totally different because we are in touch with the internal voices of the Stevens characters. But because we've been through chapter 1, we know what's going to happen and that raises our anticipation and expectation - but that becomes all the more exciting because we didn't expect the internal voices and thoughts and sights of the Stevens clan. To see Big Joe - who we felt we knew before - to watch him transform physical and especially mentally - as he struggles to process the new thoughts and feelings - and becomes something else - it's so wonderful. I'm sure I'm not the only reader who wishes the black/orange rubber stuff would reach into my brain and draw me closer!! You've always been an amazing writer and this shows you still are!!
10/12/23, 12:18 PM
Eeeh I love your work on CHYOA
10/12/23, 12:16 PM
Love this take on one of my favorite tropes!
10/12/23, 10:32 AM
πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
10/12/23, 7:52 AM
Great story. Cannot wait for the next part. Can you share the original Chinese name of this story as well? I really want to read the Google translate version first.

Kuu
10/12/23, 8:58 AM
@[taro](/user/show/159835) https://wyblogs.eu.org/posts/%E5%AF%84%E7%94%9F%E8%99%AB%E4%B9%8B%E6%A2%A6.html I use chrome so I can just google translate the whole page.
10/11/23, 9:27 PM
Do you mind sharing the links to the blog you mentioned? Thanks I’m advance

Kuu
10/12/23, 8:57 AM
@[TheWanderer](/user/show/139065) https://wyblogs.eu.org/posts/%E5%AF%84%E7%94%9F%E8%99%AB%E4%B9%8B%E6%A2%A6.html