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10/11/23, 6:57 AM
Una historia bella, eso sí, un poco larga qué hubiera sido mejor digerirlo por partes xd, pero una hermosa historia de pasado, siento que la del Amo de Rafa es todo lo contrario a la historia de Axel jaja

10/11/23, 9:37 AM
@[Splat Player](/user/show/10027939) Puedo adelantarte que la historia de Sebas (el Amo) es mucho mas oscura y agresiva, pero eso se hablará muucho después, igualmente creo que puedo desglosar aún mas la historia de Axel, hacer una mini historia aparte quizá...
10/10/23, 10:34 PM
This was really a good story, I actually wished sometimes it was me who was getting trained into it. Really congratulations for writing this story. I really love it.

10/11/23, 5:50 AM
@[Jay-Sage](/user/show/2530368) I'm really glad you've enjoyed it! <3
bbRyan
10/11/23, 4:15 AM
@Plymouth58 😢
10/11/23, 3:25 AM
Hot!! 😍😛🤤
RJG
10/11/23, 12:06 AM
This is fantastic, Easily one of the best I've read on here.

10/11/23, 2:57 AM
@[RJG](/user/show/10007383) I'm so honored, thank you so much! It's sort of funny but as I was writing this, I ended up realizing that it was sort of in a dialogue with the first smutty story I'd ever written ~~at the blatantly virginal age of 14~~. I'm really happy with how this came out, and I'm glad you let me know you liked it!
10/10/23, 8:08 PM
The fist part was great but this one is much longer. It is brilliant. I am looking forward to reading what's coming. Thank you.

10/11/23, 2:02 AM
@[naturellementsoumis](/user/show/1193036) Thank you, my pleasure ! I hope I won't disappoint with the next one then :)
Anonymous
10/11/23, 12:57 AM
Come on, Nick! You're not seriously going to let a guy who calls himself *Tryhard* beat you, are you?!

10/11/23, 1:10 AM
@Anonymous But he's a _really_ serious villain! ;) He hates losing! Fun fact; **Tri-Hard's** name comes from his first battle-suit. His plan was to match **Mister Freedom's** strength, but then use a third robot arm to turn the tables as they grappled! Unfortunately, while **Tri-Hard** was able to match his rival in strength, he wasn't able to out-maneuver **Mister Freedom** and was outplayed in their first real fight! Forced to reveal his 'secret weapon' as part of his escape, **Tri-Hard** was salty about the whole thing and dropped the plan, but the name stuck. None of that is relevant to the story,... you're welcome ;)
10/11/23, 12:37 AM
Ooh this is hot! How very interesting. I hope Jayson becomes a dominant top who loves eating and fucking ass. Hehe Yeah, this is cool! Very sexy.
Zander
10/10/23, 10:13 PM
It’s still interesting, let’s see what happens next. By the way, would it be nice if this was also a story with an alternative choice (what would happen if he chose to free himself from the cage)? ​
10/10/23, 9:27 PM
When Aladdin isn't needed anyway, why don't hypnotize him into believing he is a dumb, naked monkey for Sultan Jafar's amusement? :D