Recent Comments

Ab3
10/11/23, 4:42 PM
Woww that's a nice start.. wishing Jayson getting fucked and begging for a gang bang to get his ass fucked by everyone
X
9/30/23, 2:17 PM
New Chapter soon?

10/1/23, 4:38 AM
@X Hi. I'm about 2000 words in for the new chapter. I already submitted my one-off though. I can't promise when the new chapter will appear.

X
10/1/23, 8:56 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Great! excited to read the new one-off!

X
10/11/23, 10:39 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Hello, any updates?

10/11/23, 1:39 PM
@X Hi. I'll try to upload the next chapter before the end of the weekend.
Anonymous
10/11/23, 1:23 PM
Fuuuuck white to black is so fucking hot....
Anonymous
10/11/23, 11:11 AM
Oi de novo, que bom que continuou escrevendo, vamos ver o que acontece com o campeão agora
10/11/23, 10:40 AM
More please! You're a great writer 🔥
10/11/23, 10:12 AM
google does translate but i think its better for tech documents that don’t use words like slang and or worlds with accents that mean different things for authenticity of story i think the author translation is best. to choose different phrases that don’t get lost in a automated translation. I would like to read a author translation if its possible.
Martin
10/10/23, 6:35 PM
Using the browser's integrated translation feature (Chrome or Edge) works well enough to translate your story to English. I always use that to be able to approve the stories.

10/11/23, 10:11 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) google does translate but i think its better for tech documents that don't use words like slang and or worlds with accents that mean different things for authenticity of story i think the author translation is best. to choose different phrases that don't get lost in a automated translation. I would like to read a author translation if its possible.
10/11/23, 6:57 AM
Una historia bella, eso sí, un poco larga qué hubiera sido mejor digerirlo por partes xd, pero una hermosa historia de pasado, siento que la del Amo de Rafa es todo lo contrario a la historia de Axel jaja

10/11/23, 9:37 AM
@[Splat Player](/user/show/10027939) Puedo adelantarte que la historia de Sebas (el Amo) es mucho mas oscura y agresiva, pero eso se hablará muucho después, igualmente creo que puedo desglosar aún mas la historia de Axel, hacer una mini historia aparte quizá...
10/10/23, 10:34 PM
This was really a good story, I actually wished sometimes it was me who was getting trained into it. Really congratulations for writing this story. I really love it.

10/11/23, 5:50 AM
@[Jay-Sage](/user/show/2530368) I'm really glad you've enjoyed it! <3
bbRyan
10/11/23, 4:15 AM
@Plymouth58 😢