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10/9/23, 3:52 PM
This is great stuff. Can’t wait for more!! Also hope he’s not the only one with this problem haha

10/9/23, 5:04 PM
@[Kibble The Satyr](/user/show/10010407) Thanks so much for saying so! I guess you'll just have to keep reading to find out lmao
Anonymous
10/9/23, 4:22 PM
Amazing!
10/9/23, 3:55 PM
Very nice start of a mindcontrolled odysee! I enjoyed how the three guys standing mindless in front of him. I'm looking forward to read more, please! :-)
Anonymous
10/8/23, 6:23 PM
Should have left perfection alone. This is just awful.

10/8/23, 6:32 PM
@Anonymous Kisses <3<3<3

10/9/23, 2:51 PM
@Anonymous Hey, now…Edlam took a risk making a story in someone else’s universe and provided me with my first bit of fan fiction ever, which is something I have wanted ever since I started writing. It might not be your cup of tea, but that doesn’t make it bad. *I* think he’s doing a fabulous job with the characters, even if he takes them in directions I, in my limited way, wouldn’t have thought of. And never forget that LBAH featured a Jolly Green Giant possessed by an angel exploding a can of beans all over the protagonist…the story is a lot of things, but *perfection* might be a bit optimistic. ;)
10/9/23, 2:14 PM
So so so good!! 🤩🤤🤤
10/9/23, 1:45 PM
Fuck this story is so perfect!!! Another super hot chapter. I get so happy whenever I see a new update from you here. Thank you so much for writing it. Tyler eating Oliver out was so freaking hot. Can’t wait to see both studs finally fucking the dumb twink’s ass. Well done!
Elm
10/9/23, 10:49 AM
What a fantastic story! So so very good!

10/9/23, 1:38 PM
@[Elm](/user/show/567745) Heya, thanks - since I started this series due to the Summer Challenge prompt, I've been thinking that the Halloween Challenge would be a good time to continue the story (with a theme-appropriate twist, too, not that a series about witches needs it, lol). So stay tuned...
10/9/23, 1:09 PM
Keep the chapters coming to keep us cumming.
Anonymous
10/9/23, 1:04 PM
Awesome. Can't wait for the next part
Martin
10/9/23, 8:46 AM
There was a bit of confusion about how you're naming your series. In the first chapter, you used "Kingdom of Ardenne" as the series title, as for the subsequent chapters you used "Becoming a Man" as the series title. That confused the system and our approval team. I've just fixed that: All your chapters are now in the series "Kingdom of Ardenne". Please use that series name for subsequent chapters. And thank you for publishing your stories on our sites!

10/9/23, 9:13 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you! I was confused by the Series/Chapter system and I definitely made it worse by totally rewriting chap 1. Thanks for taking charge and consolidating them!