Recent Comments

Martin
10/7/23, 6:35 AM
@rubbrsome I took the liberty of embedding the images you linked. It's not difficult to do, it's just a matter of two clicks. If you like the version with embedded images (it's not published yet, so only you can see it), please click "Publish" on this. And I'll gladly show you how to do that. Just contact me on chat on the forum or anywhere else.

10/7/23, 9:06 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) OMFG Martin!!! Thanks so much! That's what I wanted the images to do. I wanted the reader to just see the images, and not have to click. Thanks so much. Every reader, please thank [BVSTARD.AI](https://www.instagram.com/bvstard.ai/) for the images, and Martin for helping me out for my lack of knowledge. Sorry if I'm not being articulate, it's 3 am and I'm trying to get reader for work.
10/7/23, 8:35 AM
The best Naga!Kaa story I've ever read
MHO
10/7/23, 7:46 AM
Can I request more? Id love to know what happens in the try outs and how the jock recruitment goes....so hot.
May 22, 2015
10/7/23, 7:38 AM
Excellent start! I hope some day you show us exactly how SG becomes Freddy's dog... he wants it! But what needs to happen to make it a reality?
Anonymous
10/7/23, 7:08 AM
The Horror! The way you describe slick bodies is next level!
2/22/21, 12:06 PM
I think the original story is a classic, so I started reading with some reservations. About a third of the way into it, I bought into some of the changes. But when we hit the second half of the story, it all fell apart for me. Seems to me that the second (post prison) half is a whole different animal and probably should be a story in and of itself. To quote Jane Austen: “Too many cooks spoil the broth”.

10/7/23, 4:14 AM
@[Body Odor](/user/show/962263) Do you know where I can find the original?
Anonymous
10/6/23, 3:24 PM
Great story! Definitely need more nerd TFs! The only suggestion I have is to focus on the transformation a bit more, just instead of going off "scene" and coming back transformed. Describing the actual transformation would bring these stories to the next level!

10/7/23, 1:20 AM
@Anonymous I plan to do that I just wanted to save some mystery as I want to have a bit of variety in each chapter.
Pup_Lumos
10/7/23, 12:25 AM
I'm absolutely in love with this story I keep finding myself drawn back Probably read at least once a month if not more
10/7/23, 12:18 AM
Excited to have you back! 😍😍
Anonymous
10/6/23, 11:54 PM
Glad to see you back! Fun, evocative, speculative writing here!