Recent Comments

10/6/23, 12:55 AM
This was sexy! Would have loved to know more of what happened while he was under, but you kept the narrative tight, which I understand. The hypnotizing sections were really sensual and hot. Good work!
10/5/23, 10:45 PM
Loved the pup play! This was a very hot scene.
10/5/23, 7:59 PM
Please continue this story!!
10/5/23, 7:46 PM
Love the series so far and that you are making some with Asian tops. I agree it's a weirdly under represented group and glad to see it here
10/5/23, 7:44 PM
I like the premise! Not sure if you are continuing that day at the university series, but would love to see more of that one too if you are
Martin
10/5/23, 7:06 PM
The links to your images are broken, it would be better to upload them to our site (the image dialog allows to upload images, too). Also, your story would read much easier if you'd add more paragraph breaks. Usually, a new paragraph is started each time another person starts to speak. But nevertheless, your story is really hot!
10/5/23, 6:56 PM
Such a hot chapter! Like there are many good chapters in this series but this one (and the previous one) call to me.
Sep 27, 2023
10/5/23, 5:45 PM
It was a very good story, even if the term "transformer" was a bit distracting. OwO You often have very unique ideas and touching if a bit sad stories, and this one is no exception. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
10/5/23, 5:18 PM
Amazing conclusion! I appreciate the attention to detail that went into this, and the twist ending is great fun (the moment of hope being snatched away by the realization that your supposed savior has already been corrupted). The diary of the doomed doctor is a great touch too. Great job.