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5/3/25, 3:23 PM
Hot. Can't wait for more

lukas pucci
5/3/25, 8:44 PM
@Jonanator chapter two is done! just tweaking it!
5/3/25, 10:15 PM
I just read the first story and lo and behold the new installment dropped into my lap. I figured you’d go after Braxton and I wasn’t shocked.

5/4/25, 5:47 PM
@[HypnoCougar](/user/show/10060928) Hope you enjoy the series!
5/3/25, 11:03 PM
I like this chapter, but I did like the other chapters a bit more. I liked how you developed the interrelationship between characters a lot more, and would have liked to see Brad actively changing Curtis a bit more, or maybe bring out the part of Curtis that was always horny for his dad. Overall, it is a great addition to the series, and I really look forward to reading more.

5/4/25, 10:03 PM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) I wasn't entirely happy with this chapter, was pretty distracted. I might rewrite parts of it, I was rewriting it until publishing. There was even another character, a mother, but I killed her off.
Nov 11, 2023
Dean
5/3/25, 11:06 PM
Sweet story bruv! Ace writing innit!
5/3/25, 11:09 PM
I really like the series! I really hoped to see Trevor and Eugene together, but I do like that it isn’t like a hive mind. Each person still has their goals, so that is great to see. I still hope to see some younger brothers come to the university to check it out and get as hooked on TeamJock.

5/4/25, 9:45 AM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) Thanks for your support! TeamJock will certainly expand its reach :shushing_face:
5/3/25, 11:38 PM
Okay this was hot. Hot and sexy. I like how Daddy Jason turned Hayden into his good boy, into his son. I loved how Hayden's mind went elsewhere do to the musk and stuff. As a side thing, I kind of want Markus to take over. Maybe he can be the actual Daddy for Hayden.
5/4/25, 12:35 AM
Oh wow this is hot. I am thankful for complying and reading it, hehe i wonder if theres continuation for this.
5/4/25, 12:50 AM
I thought this was just fantastic. Love the premise, love the suspense. I couldn't rate much further because this was all set-up and wow am I excited about the next issue. That said, I downgraded writing because even though it is really good, remember that _less is more_.

5/4/25, 11:18 PM
@[AgingAthlete](/user/show/379995) Thank you so much for your enthusiastic feedback — I’m really glad the premise and suspense pulled you in. As for the “less is more” comment, I totally get where you're coming from. That said, for this story, I’ve deliberately gone for a denser, more immersive style — almost hypnotic — to match Owen’s gradual transformation. I know that might not be everyone’s cup of tea, but it’s a conscious choice. I hope you’ll enjoy what’s coming next just as much!