Recent Comments

jay
10/2/23, 10:10 PM
Yes please continue can’t wait for more
10/2/23, 10:07 PM
This story always keep you on your toes with what will happen! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: Very cool and engaging.😀
10/2/23, 9:29 PM
VERY hot story!!!! :hot_face:
10/2/23, 6:23 PM
I have never heard of such a creature! I liked the "around the campfire" vibe, lots of characters to play with in the future!

10/2/23, 9:08 PM
@[Norismo](/user/show/2849185) Oh, I invented it. I had a bizarre erotic dream involving half-human, half-centipede hypno creature, and it convinced me to write this story. Thanks! Chapter 2 and 3 are currently being worked on!
Sep 15, 2023
10/2/23, 8:48 PM
I have literally come back to this story again and again. So good and descriptive, love the mind change and physical descriptions. I'm locked right now and this made me click purchase on a rosebud cylinder pump!
Kippers
10/2/23, 7:59 PM
I would have preferred more details, but an excellent premise of the downfall and degradation that comes from greed for money. Allow us to look into the world of Max, where part of him enjoys plunging items deep in his pussy, and debasing himself for a buck. It would be even hotter after auctions totaling thousands of dollars, finding the $47 owed to him trickling into his account from porncam. Word spreads fast among wealthy deviants seeking a whore who can't say no. I bet it would make its way to some locals in his town who would corner him for impromptu auctions in alleyways, the public library, and even churches. There's no reason an unwilling slut shouldn't increase his earnings.
Martin
10/2/23, 7:53 PM
That is a very hot premiere here! Welcome!
Sep 29, 2023
Gingcub
10/2/23, 7:33 PM
PLEASE more. My cock is dripping with anticipation
Oct 1, 2023
10/2/23, 7:19 PM
Please more. I love the idea of Supercop destroyed.
Kippers
10/2/23, 7:13 PM
Well written, but there isn't any sex. The word appears multiple times, but zilch as for details. Having the victim black out every time he's under control was a pointless plot point here. At the very least, make the reader aware of what's going on.