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10/1/23, 9:04 PM
Fun and Hot
Oct 1, 2023
Whitey
10/1/23, 8:58 PM
Wow! Great story! Hope you continue and debase and humiliate him in his "uniform."
10/1/23, 8:20 PM
Just reread this, and there's so much to like here, starting with getting to know Onyx - some of his backstory, how he thinks and his motivations, what he can do, and how he works. Then there's our fist look at Daybreaker, and what a world beater he'll be for Master. Wow! So much more powerful than Jamie/Kid Rocket. I can't wait to see Jamie find or figure out it was him, and how much temptation that will be for him. What will finally tip him over the edge and into Master's warm latex embrace? And how will it come about? To top it off, we see the beginning of Luxor's downfall take shape. I really want to see what Master's "subtlest Brute" and "fun little experiment" can do with and to him. There's so much to look forward to in this story.
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 6:45 PM
Me encantaría leer más me gusta esto
10/1/23, 6:04 PM
I'm not at all into pup play but the exceptionally hot image gave me a place to start and the story was well conceived. I agree though. I would have loved to see another 25000 words describing some of the things he had done, learned and practiced This could be a favourite for me. Who knows, maybe an entry into Pup fetish for me as well. HOT concept there. Do a second and maybe third chapter to fill in the blanks: Maybe how the partner found the training session and some of the indoctrination, and do be descriptive of the physical transition...Oooo and more pictures!
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 6:00 PM
Hot idea, very well done. Would love to read more either of this or like this
10/1/23, 5:57 PM
Hot stuff, especially once Gill gets control of his coworkers. I'm eager to see how the showdown between our two mind controllers will shake out.
10/1/23, 5:07 PM
Your story is so fucking hot! I need more!
9/29/23, 9:00 PM
Lmao this was sexy, sure, but also to be honest pretty fucking hilarious, Aiden is an absolute shithead and everything is probably gonna come crashing down on him, but honestly I'm here for the ride lol

10/1/23, 3:52 PM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) Haha hilarity + humiliation = sexy to me :angel:
Swizz
10/1/23, 3:38 PM
This is my favorite chapter so far! Love it!