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Anonymous
10/1/23, 10:20 PM
I hope Hyun gets roped into this!
Anonymous
10/1/23, 10:15 PM
I really hope Jafar is successful in ensnaring Aladdin
10/1/23, 3:48 PM
I started reading your other work after enjoying your "power of names" submission a lot. Any chance you'd add a sequel for this year's Halloween? It just ended on such a cliffhanger... Pretty please

10/1/23, 9:12 PM
@[Priapus](/user/show/1667919) I'm so glad you've been enjoying my work! Thanks for taking the time to comment! Actually, I've been working a sequel to Ferula Drudeana since last winter, but I've been a bit stuck! With your encouragement, hopefully I'll be able to get back on it. Who knows, maybe that'll be in time for Halloween!
10/1/23, 9:04 PM
Fun and Hot
Oct 1, 2023
Whitey
10/1/23, 8:58 PM
Wow! Great story! Hope you continue and debase and humiliate him in his "uniform."
10/1/23, 8:20 PM
Just reread this, and there's so much to like here, starting with getting to know Onyx - some of his backstory, how he thinks and his motivations, what he can do, and how he works. Then there's our fist look at Daybreaker, and what a world beater he'll be for Master. Wow! So much more powerful than Jamie/Kid Rocket. I can't wait to see Jamie find or figure out it was him, and how much temptation that will be for him. What will finally tip him over the edge and into Master's warm latex embrace? And how will it come about? To top it off, we see the beginning of Luxor's downfall take shape. I really want to see what Master's "subtlest Brute" and "fun little experiment" can do with and to him. There's so much to look forward to in this story.
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 6:45 PM
Me encantaría leer más me gusta esto
10/1/23, 6:04 PM
I'm not at all into pup play but the exceptionally hot image gave me a place to start and the story was well conceived. I agree though. I would have loved to see another 25000 words describing some of the things he had done, learned and practiced This could be a favourite for me. Who knows, maybe an entry into Pup fetish for me as well. HOT concept there. Do a second and maybe third chapter to fill in the blanks: Maybe how the partner found the training session and some of the indoctrination, and do be descriptive of the physical transition...Oooo and more pictures!
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 6:00 PM
Hot idea, very well done. Would love to read more either of this or like this