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Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 6:00 PM
Hot idea, very well done. Would love to read more either of this or like this
10/1/23, 5:57 PM
Hot stuff, especially once Gill gets control of his coworkers. I'm eager to see how the showdown between our two mind controllers will shake out.
10/1/23, 5:07 PM
Your story is so fucking hot! I need more!
9/29/23, 9:00 PM
Lmao this was sexy, sure, but also to be honest pretty fucking hilarious, Aiden is an absolute shithead and everything is probably gonna come crashing down on him, but honestly I'm here for the ride lol

10/1/23, 3:52 PM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) Haha hilarity + humiliation = sexy to me :angel:
Swizz
10/1/23, 3:38 PM
This is my favorite chapter so far! Love it!
10/1/23, 2:57 PM
This is so good!! Love the butler hypnosis things, and the servant hypnotizing the master to be more master-y is also great, cant wait to see where this goes!
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 2:51 PM
Need more!!
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 2:46 PM
Alpha man huh..
10/1/23, 2:28 PM
Entertaining story, but it moved waaaay too fast. Slow down. Show what is happening by taking your reader through events as the characters are experiencing them. You are simply throwing quick summaries at the reader. Your stories will be better told (and much hotter) if you show instead of tell. That said, the underlying idea was very hot, and I enjoyed the story.
10/1/23, 2:09 PM
I just read the series. Very enjoyable. But, I will admit that I would have much rather seen Scott and Arturo reduced to muscle sluts spending the next eight years fucking and getting fucked mindlessly 24/7 rather than safely waiting out their rescue in Spain. But, then, if I were in Scott or Arturo's place, I know that would have been my desire.