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10/1/23, 2:57 PM
This is so good!! Love the butler hypnosis things, and the servant hypnotizing the master to be more master-y is also great, cant wait to see where this goes!
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 2:51 PM
Need more!!
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 2:46 PM
Alpha man huh..
10/1/23, 2:28 PM
Entertaining story, but it moved waaaay too fast. Slow down. Show what is happening by taking your reader through events as the characters are experiencing them. You are simply throwing quick summaries at the reader. Your stories will be better told (and much hotter) if you show instead of tell. That said, the underlying idea was very hot, and I enjoyed the story.
10/1/23, 2:09 PM
I just read the series. Very enjoyable. But, I will admit that I would have much rather seen Scott and Arturo reduced to muscle sluts spending the next eight years fucking and getting fucked mindlessly 24/7 rather than safely waiting out their rescue in Spain. But, then, if I were in Scott or Arturo's place, I know that would have been my desire.
10/1/23, 1:18 PM
Please post chapter 3 FAST!! 💜💜💜
10/1/23, 1:18 PM
Oh my God this story is just so fucking perfect man!! You’re a great writer and I’m sooo fucking glad you’re writing this so fast!! Twinky big bro is so clumsy I really want to see him maybe tripping and falling face down on Noah’s crotch, rubbing his entire face on Noah’s big teen jock cock… and maybe big bro accidentally exposes his bubble butt and tight little hole to Noah again and his jock friends? I bet Noah’s jock friends all really love Oliver and always grope his ass when they see him when hugging him… Oliver always gets startled to feel the jock’s bulges pressing against him 🤤
Lampshade15
10/1/23, 1:07 PM
This is so hot! Having the older guy being manipulated, controlled and dominated by the younger guy really gets me going.
Martin
10/1/23, 12:29 PM
What an interesting, unique and hot concept!

10/1/23, 1:07 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Aw thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
10/1/23, 11:58 AM
Another great chapter! I get the feeling it's starting to get out of hand. Jason started the day wanting Nathan to be more chill, but by the end he couldn't bare the thought of free time. I hope they won't start to radicalize each other and going overboard. Still, I am very curious to see what happens next and based on your previous stories I know I can trust you :)