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10/1/23, 6:04 PM
I'm not at all into pup play but the exceptionally hot image gave me a place to start and the story was well conceived. I agree though. I would have loved to see another 25000 words describing some of the things he had done, learned and practiced This could be a favourite for me. Who knows, maybe an entry into Pup fetish for me as well. HOT concept there. Do a second and maybe third chapter to fill in the blanks: Maybe how the partner found the training session and some of the indoctrination, and do be descriptive of the physical transition...Oooo and more pictures!
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 6:00 PM
Hot idea, very well done. Would love to read more either of this or like this
10/1/23, 5:57 PM
Hot stuff, especially once Gill gets control of his coworkers. I'm eager to see how the showdown between our two mind controllers will shake out.
10/1/23, 5:07 PM
Your story is so fucking hot! I need more!
9/29/23, 9:00 PM
Lmao this was sexy, sure, but also to be honest pretty fucking hilarious, Aiden is an absolute shithead and everything is probably gonna come crashing down on him, but honestly I'm here for the ride lol

10/1/23, 3:52 PM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) Haha hilarity + humiliation = sexy to me :angel:
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10/1/23, 3:38 PM
This is my favorite chapter so far! Love it!
10/1/23, 2:57 PM
This is so good!! Love the butler hypnosis things, and the servant hypnotizing the master to be more master-y is also great, cant wait to see where this goes!
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 2:51 PM
Need more!!
Oct 1, 2023
10/1/23, 2:46 PM
Alpha man huh..
10/1/23, 2:28 PM
Entertaining story, but it moved waaaay too fast. Slow down. Show what is happening by taking your reader through events as the characters are experiencing them. You are simply throwing quick summaries at the reader. Your stories will be better told (and much hotter) if you show instead of tell. That said, the underlying idea was very hot, and I enjoyed the story.