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10/1/23, 2:28 PM
Entertaining story, but it moved waaaay too fast. Slow down. Show what is happening by taking your reader through events as the characters are experiencing them. You are simply throwing quick summaries at the reader. Your stories will be better told (and much hotter) if you show instead of tell. That said, the underlying idea was very hot, and I enjoyed the story.
10/1/23, 2:09 PM
I just read the series. Very enjoyable. But, I will admit that I would have much rather seen Scott and Arturo reduced to muscle sluts spending the next eight years fucking and getting fucked mindlessly 24/7 rather than safely waiting out their rescue in Spain. But, then, if I were in Scott or Arturo's place, I know that would have been my desire.
10/1/23, 1:18 PM
Please post chapter 3 FAST!! 💜💜💜
10/1/23, 1:18 PM
Oh my God this story is just so fucking perfect man!! You’re a great writer and I’m sooo fucking glad you’re writing this so fast!! Twinky big bro is so clumsy I really want to see him maybe tripping and falling face down on Noah’s crotch, rubbing his entire face on Noah’s big teen jock cock… and maybe big bro accidentally exposes his bubble butt and tight little hole to Noah again and his jock friends? I bet Noah’s jock friends all really love Oliver and always grope his ass when they see him when hugging him… Oliver always gets startled to feel the jock’s bulges pressing against him 🤤
Lampshade15
10/1/23, 1:07 PM
This is so hot! Having the older guy being manipulated, controlled and dominated by the younger guy really gets me going.
Martin
10/1/23, 12:29 PM
What an interesting, unique and hot concept!

10/1/23, 1:07 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Aw thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
10/1/23, 11:58 AM
Another great chapter! I get the feeling it's starting to get out of hand. Jason started the day wanting Nathan to be more chill, but by the end he couldn't bare the thought of free time. I hope they won't start to radicalize each other and going overboard. Still, I am very curious to see what happens next and based on your previous stories I know I can trust you :)
10/1/23, 9:14 AM
Oh my goodness this is fantastic. I agree with the above. Mutual brainwashing is a real turn on. Cannot wait for the next one.
10/1/23, 8:40 AM
Very hot! I love that you're taking this some unexpected places, and loved some of the stage-style commands in this chapter. Can't wait for more!
10/1/23, 7:37 AM
Very original and creative concept. Mutual brainwashing -- who would have thought?! I am glad that you decided to have them each assume the roles as Nathan originally planned. It's not so much that they are each trying to control the other but rather that they are helping each other be better and happier at what they were each expected to do. Still i am hoping that they each evolve into a more extreme version of what they are now clearly meant to be -- Nathan as a confident, dominant, and controlling Master who has a thoughtful, considerate, loving side to him, and Jason as a caring, dedicated, loyal, hard-working, obedient, submissive slave. Very much looking forward to additional chapters from you!! Thanks so much for a very intriguing and increasingly erotic story.