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Jul 6, 2022
Lampshade15
9/22/23, 2:46 PM
Very very hot story, a great debut! Looking forward to reading future chapters

9/29/23, 11:02 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Appreciate it man, thanks a lot.
Jul 6, 2022
12/16/22, 6:50 PM
Too hot story!!! This needs to be continued

9/29/23, 11:02 PM
@[Big-g](/user/show/10020627) Thanks man, appreciate the feedback.
9/29/23, 9:28 PM
Oh that was definitely good. Damn love that!
Woohoo
9/29/23, 8:36 PM
New chapter!
Mind Bender
9/29/23, 8:20 PM
Love love love how you write. I love those kaa elements. I like how you incorporated it to the modern presentation. So good! 💕
Anonymous
9/16/23, 4:27 PM
Why do the chosen 50% get picked? Would I get picked?

9/29/23, 7:57 PM
@Anonymous The reason is pretty much: Because this is how "the system" works. They get chosen based on a random selection, known even before a family decides to reproduce. They can even decide not to reproduce if they don't want to contribute to "the system". But this plot is kind of... not really set in stone yet.
9/29/23, 7:47 PM
And Sam just keeps falling deeper and deeper. His dad should lock him into chastity. Make him constantly aroused without the chance to cum. Though I am wondering if Dave wants Eric as an accomplice or will he do try and make him a second slave?
9/29/23, 4:12 PM
Love how this is going, but at the beginning I became a little confused who was who in regards to Alan and Noah

9/29/23, 7:12 PM
@[JayBean](/user/show/1019324) Thanks for the feedback! This has def been a little sloppy, so I’ll try to edify it a bit more clearly in future installments.
Lampshade15
9/29/23, 6:41 PM
Oh my god, yes yes yes. The reaction of the others when Romeo discovers them is so hot. It's great to see all the shenanigans unleashed now that the gang are leaving the cabin. Really excited to see what comes next!
9/29/23, 6:26 PM
Really good! It would be hot if Noah gets topped by the protagonist. I'm interested in the continuation!