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9/30/23, 3:51 PM
Tick Tock…
9/30/23, 2:34 PM
Fuck bro I love just how corrupted and reversed everyone has gotten, my favorite being Ian and giving into his gluttony! Gaining has always been one of my favorite kinks to admire and I love that he's succumbed to it! Using Romeo's self-hate and internally inflicted Wrath to build and fill him, his implosion and holding everything in being his downfall (very reminiscent of me 😅) that turned him into a conduit and freed the boys out into the world to corrupt others~ amazing as always!
Ab3
9/30/23, 12:46 PM
Damn... It's getting more better chapter by chapter.. but please make it more erotic in next parts... Also need someone to stand up against Dr. Sinclair too but that's later... In next part make whole college his slave..
9/30/23, 12:01 PM
So hot!! Hope your get inspired to write a chapter 3 at some point, when it excites you again 😍
9/30/23, 7:46 AM
The body changes are one thing; i liked how it was initially dismissed but the Ben was aware of it. The sudden "Oh, and you're a doctor," is jarring. It's one thing to have mentioned college dreams in part 1, but that's a giant leap for one night's rest and the beginning descriptions of this transformation. That out of nowhere, "also we're married," is just WHAT?
Anonymous
9/30/23, 7:23 AM
Really need to see what happens when Stephen perfects his formula :drooling_face: :smiling_imp: Also I think what the previous poster meant to say was all that *Ethan* went through to save Stephen. Poor guy could've gone his whole life without ever knowing the glory of being a sweaty, horny, muscular wrestler :cold_sweat: So relieved to see that Ethan was able to help his bro see reason in the end(with Coach's guidance and the rest of the team assisting, of course)
9/30/23, 5:58 AM
Sorry, Aidan. What goes around, comes around, I guess. :) Great story! Waiting for more!
Dec 31, 2011
9/30/23, 4:21 AM
Yes, I agree. I loved the struggle, but wish the story had not eneded so quickly.
9/30/23, 3:19 AM
😈😈😈😈
9/29/23, 11:12 PM
Wow! What a twist! Jackson ending up being the victim of Wrath was a surprise, and the idea of Romeo being a conduit for it was equally brilliant (because ultimately, you feel wrath when you look at other people and hate them), as was his self-hatred becoming a different form of the sin. And that leaves the big one…the one that goeth before a fall…deadly PRIDE. Sin of Lucifer himself…what will happen next? (P.S. Just want to say it’s awesome that you made Panox non-binary! A reference to Desire of the Endless, perhaps?)

9/30/23, 2:33 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Thanks for your comment! I actually hadn’t heard of Desire; I’ve only gotten a few tidbits about Sandman but haven’t read it so that was really cool to hear. I was definitely going for a similar vibe, though. I’m glad it was appreciated!