Recent Comments

9/29/23, 10:25 AM
I really love the way the obliviousness is done in this story so far. Eager to see how this continues.
9/29/23, 10:04 AM
fantastic!
HolesomeGay
9/29/23, 9:32 AM
serve Obey Submit.......I know my destiny, Coach Mansell has my all forever! Fuck me harder Coach
9/29/23, 7:07 AM
After another long period of writer's block and life busyness I've finally returned to try to finish up the saga. I made good progress today, it won't be long now . . .
9/29/23, 7:07 AM
Really hot writing! The apps gimmicks could be worked in a little better and more clearly, but the writing overall was quite hot. I liked how you describe his interactions with his dad, particularly the way that the dad reacts to the commands. There's just something endearing about the lazy and slightly grumpy daddy lol. I'd love to see how you'd write a more physically intimate scene between the two of them.
9/29/23, 7:03 AM
If this story isnโ€™t continuing I was wondering if you would consider writing a โ€œwhat ifโ€ alternate ending where Eddie won instead ?? ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
9/29/23, 6:45 AM
๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜
9/29/23, 6:13 AM
Fantastic horny story, wow. We need more like that. Please write more.....
9/29/23, 5:31 AM
I apologize for not commenting here earlier. This is actually the second time I've read this series, the first time a year ago July. I rated it very highly last July but failed to make this comment on this last chapter, failed to thank you profusely for a wonderful story of seduction and submission, and failed to mark every chapter a favorite. I admit that i love gay erotic stories in which the seduction, dominance and control, undeniable shifting power exchange and transition of a very willing bottom boi into a fully obedient slave is the primary theme. You created a perfect fantasy for a submissive boy in search of a Dominant(s). Thank you so very much!
9/29/23, 5:23 AM
Awesome story!