Recent Comments

9/29/23, 5:21 AM
really looking forward to more aladdin content! cannot wait!
Ab3
9/29/23, 4:20 AM
Waiting for the next instalment... Would love to see whole college getting controlled by Sinclair nd everyone just cumming anywhere in the campus
Anonymous
9/29/23, 3:44 AM
Please keep going! This is an awesome read.
Sep 27, 2023
9/29/23, 3:03 AM
Fantastic. You have such a talent for telling emotive and emotional stories that through the bitter find the sweet. Wholesomely wonderful.
9/29/23, 12:14 AM
Much better. I was very dissatisfied with the original ending. Chad became a much less sympathetic character when he just up and (effectively) murders Ethan (an innocent) at the end. This ending was far more satisfying.

9/29/23, 2:01 AM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) Thank you.
9/28/23, 11:11 PM
I really love this ending.

9/29/23, 2:01 AM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) I’m glad
9/29/23, 1:58 AM
God, this hits so many of my buttons. Well done!
Anonymous
9/29/23, 1:47 AM
incredibly hot
9/29/23, 12:54 AM
We may not get these chapters often enough, but oh, they're good when we do. I really love the way this one progressively escalates. It goes from a more or less ordinary day at the gym, to an extraordinarily strange one, to giving us our first amazing look at Daybreaker. I'm not sure if Neon Demon planned that consciously, or it's just an incredibly good writer's instinct showing. Either way, we get to enjoy the result. I also really liked the display and exposition of Onyx's power. All in all a really satisfying entry in a story full of great ones.