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9/28/23, 11:11 PM
I really love this ending.

9/29/23, 2:01 AM
@[Gay_Genes](/user/show/298626) I’m glad
9/29/23, 1:58 AM
God, this hits so many of my buttons. Well done!
Anonymous
9/29/23, 1:47 AM
incredibly hot
9/29/23, 12:54 AM
We may not get these chapters often enough, but oh, they're good when we do. I really love the way this one progressively escalates. It goes from a more or less ordinary day at the gym, to an extraordinarily strange one, to giving us our first amazing look at Daybreaker. I'm not sure if Neon Demon planned that consciously, or it's just an incredibly good writer's instinct showing. Either way, we get to enjoy the result. I also really liked the display and exposition of Onyx's power. All in all a really satisfying entry in a story full of great ones.
thebigox1013
9/28/23, 11:36 PM
So glad to see this one going. Such a hot story so far.
9/23/23, 1:56 AM
Oh wow a very unique and hot story. I know that is says Epilogue, but would there be a sequel about his pregnancy or is that it?

9/28/23, 11:15 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thanks for the support. About a sequel, I guess we shall see. ;)
9/28/23, 11:09 PM
hot
9/28/23, 8:07 AM
Is this by any means influenced by the "I need more boolets sir" guy? šŸ˜‚ On another note, I'm so excited to see you turning the story into a series! Thank you for the hot story!

9/28/23, 9:21 AM
@[Somnius](/user/show/648890) Thank you! As far as the boolets guy goes, I have no idea who that is, sorry to say.

9/28/23, 12:08 PM
@[TickledPink](/user/show/151577) https://youtu.be/KdZjNg71UpU?si=kkJd4mq9i6LWOT_R This is the "I need more boolets" guy, rose to fame and became a meme because... well the video should explain itself lol. I just thought there's a relation since the similarity of "army" theme.

9/28/23, 11:03 PM
@[Somnius](/user/show/648890) Cheers, no this meme had completely passed me by. But yep, pretty self explanatory as far as the video goes.
9/28/23, 5:12 PM
Love these stories. I hope you write more which is something related to this wherein the slave is a big and muscular guys! Keep up the good writing, I'm a new fan of your works!

9/28/23, 11:01 PM
@[Erratic101](/user/show/921294) I'm glad you enjoyed it! I think you might enjoy so chapters of my other current running story if that's the case.
9/28/23, 8:42 PM
This was hot! I like the end though I like to imagine that David goes to the gym to run it because it's still his operation. Hehe

9/28/23, 11:01 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I'd wager that Carter allows David to do so in order to keep the illusion of autonomy, and someone as financially oriented and organized as Carter would also probably not want to deal with the hassle of actually managing the place or having to pay taxation, just by all intents and purposes, owns it and all of David's other Assets, that's probably in line with his M.O.