Recent Comments

9/20/23, 3:28 AM
Agree with the first comment, I find it hotter to end it with if Chad existed alongside Ethan and influenced everything he did, merging into one over time.

9/21/23, 12:49 PM
@[ChronoSeth](/user/show/427248) Thank you.

9/28/23, 2:03 PM
@[ChronoSeth](/user/show/427248) Took your feedback into consideration and wrote up an alternate ending.
9/19/23, 7:51 PM
Would have been a fun twist if Chad's final takeover failed and we ended up with gay jock Ethan in the driver's seat, but other than not getting the ending I hoped for, awesome work. Very hot. Gradual shifts in identity where new instincts and desires start asserting themselves is most of what hits my mind control kink in the first place.

Drake
9/19/23, 11:36 PM
@[goodbiforever](/user/show/1090266) Thank you. I totally get the desire for that ending. I was aiming for a spooky one.

9/28/23, 2:03 PM
@[goodbiforever](/user/show/1090266) Took your feedback into consideration and wrote up an alternate ending.
9/28/23, 1:44 PM
Got to love a pervy Dad and a pervy teacher. Now you just need the uncle and cousins and you've got debutchery 😈
9/28/23, 12:42 PM
can't wait for next part, my cock needd moar lol !
Sep 28, 2023
9/28/23, 12:33 PM
Excited to see what comes next!
Anonymous
9/28/23, 12:29 PM
NEW CHAPTER OMGGGG
9/28/23, 12:25 PM
Hello there~ I hope you enjoy this second chapter, the third and last chapter of this story is coming soon, it's a bit longer than the prior two. Anyhow, I really hope you guys enjoyed it, this story was a pleasure to write and proofread after the fact!
hairyartist
9/28/23, 12:04 PM
so hot, thank you
Sep 28, 2023
9/28/23, 11:57 AM
Hot first chapter!
9/28/23, 11:50 AM
I love how you describe this clown's victims losing their sense of self, cumming out their identity. A great chapter and I'm excited to continue reading.